Husn kee hadtaal................................SAINI

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Husn   waalo  kee   hadtaal  hai.
AashiqoN   kaa  buraa  haal  hai.

Chal siyaasat  meN rakkheN qadam.
Kursee  paisoN  kee  taksaal hai.

Sab  ke  muhN  par yahee ek baat.
Aaj    sarkaar     behaal    hai.

Nuqtaa cheeN  hai hamaaraa sanam.
Nochtaa   baal  kee   khaal  hai.

Zurmpeshaa    bashar   ke   liye.
Bas   siyaasat  hee to dhaal hai.

Meree  begam  ko   fursat naheeN.
Ghar ke pichhwaade sasauraal hai.

Asl  khaatoon  kee   umr    kyaa.
Ghattee  jaatee  vo har saal hai.

Saat  bachheN  haiN  begam kadak.
Shakhs kitnaa  vo  khushhaal hai.

Ishq  ‘saini ‘ se  ab kyaa kareN.
Vo  to   pahle  hee  kangaal hai.

Dr.Surendra Saini


हुस्न  वालो   की हड़ताल है |

आशिक़ों   का  बुरा हाल है ||
 

चल सियासत में रक्खें क़दम |

कुर्सी  पैसों  की टकसाल है ||
 

सब के मुहं पर यही एक बात |

आज    सरकार   बेहाल है ||
 

नुक़्ता  चीं  है  हमारा सनम |

नोचता    बाल की खाल है ||
 

ज़ुर्मपेशा     बशर  के लिए |

बस सियासत ही तो ढाल है ||
 

मेरी  बेगम  को फ़ुर्सत नहीं |

घर के  पिछवाड़े ससुराल है ||
 

अस्ल  ख़ातून की  उम्र क्या |

घटती जाती वो  हर साल है ||
 

सात  बच्चें  हैं बेगम  कड़क |

शख़्स कितना वो  ख़ुशहाल है ||
 

इश्क़ ‘सैनी ‘से अब क्या करें |

वो  तो  पहले  ही कंगाल है ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी

 
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2012, 06:16:56 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2012, 06:37:26 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2012, 07:03:36 AM »
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Bahut khoob Sir
meree begam ko fursat...bahut umda
sabhi ashaar khoob rahe..
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2012, 07:19:55 AM »
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Saini Sahaab Aadaab!


janab gazab dhaa rahe haiN aap mazahiyaa shayri meiN...
Kia baat hai janab bahut umdaa peshkash rahi yeH...

Meri begum ko fursat nahi hahahahahahaha...
AIk se badhkar aik sher kahe hai sahaab humari dheroN dili
daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2012, 08:40:36 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2012, 08:47:07 AM »
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Husn   waalo  kee   hadtaal  hai.
AashiqoN   kaa  buraa  haal  hai. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Chal siyaasat  meN rakkheN qadam.
Kursee  paisoN  kee  taksaal hai.

Sab  ke  muhN  par yahee ek baat.
Aaj    sarkaar     behaal    hai.

Nuqtaa cheeN  hai hamaaraa sanam.
Nochtaa   baal  kee   khaal  hai.

Jurmpeshaa    bashar   ke   liye.
Bas   siyaasat  hee to dhaal hai.

Meree  begam  ko   fursat naheeN.
Ghar ke pichhwaade sasauraal hai. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Asl  khaatoon  kee   umr    kyaa.
Ghattee  jaatee  vo har saal hai.

Saat  bachheN  haiN  begam kadak.
Shakhs kitnaa  vo  khushhaal hai.

Ishq  ‘saini ‘ se  ab kyaa kareN.
Vo  to   pahle  hee  kangaal hai.

Dr.Surendra Saini


हुस्न  वालो   की हड़ताल है |

आशिक़ों   का  बुरा हाल है ||
 

चल सियासत में रक्खें क़दम |

कुर्सी  पैसों  की टकसाल है ||
 

सब के मुहं पर यही एक बात |

आज    सरकार   बेहाल है ||
 

नुक़्ता  चीं  है  हमारा सनम |

नोचता    बाल की खाल है ||
 

ज़ुर्मपेशा     बशर  के लिए |

बस सियासत ही तो ढाल है ||
 

मेरी  बेगम  को फ़ुर्सत नहीं |

घर के  पिछवाड़े ससुराल है ||
 

अस्ल  ख़ातून की  उम्र क्या |

घटती जाती वो  हर साल है ||
 

सात  बच्चें  हैं बेगम  कड़क |

शख़्स कितना वो  ख़ुशहाल है ||
 

इश्क़ ‘सैनी ‘से अब क्या करें |

वो  तो  पहले  ही कंगाल है ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी

 



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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2012, 09:15:10 AM »
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Husn   waalo  kee   hadtaal  hai.
AashiqoN   kaa  buraa  haal  hai.

Chal siyaasat  meN rakkheN qadam.
Kursee  paisoN  kee  taksaal hai.

Sab  ke  muhN  par yahee ek baat.
Aaj    sarkaar     behaal    hai.

Nuqtaa cheeN  hai hamaaraa sanam.
Nochtaa   baal  kee   khaal  hai.

Zurmpeshaa    bashar   ke   liye. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bas   siyaasat  hee to dhaal hai. Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Meree  begam  ko   fursat naheeN.
Ghar ke pichhwaade sasauraal hai. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Asl  khaatoon  kee   umr    kyaa.
Ghattee  jaatee  vo har saal hai.

Saat  bachheN  haiN  begam kadak.
Shakhs kitnaa  vo  khushhaal hai. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Ishq  ‘saini ‘ se  ab kyaa kareN.
Vo  to   pahle  hee  kangaal hai.

Dr.Surendra Saini


हुस्न  वालो   की हड़ताल है |

आशिक़ों   का  बुरा हाल है ||
 

चल सियासत में रक्खें क़दम |

कुर्सी  पैसों  की टकसाल है ||
 

सब के मुहं पर यही एक बात |

आज    सरकार   बेहाल है ||
 

नुक़्ता  चीं  है  हमारा सनम |

नोचता    बाल की खाल है ||
 

ज़ुर्मपेशा     बशर  के लिए |

बस सियासत ही तो ढाल है ||
 

मेरी  बेगम  को फ़ुर्सत नहीं |

घर के  पिछवाड़े ससुराल है ||
 

अस्ल  ख़ातून की  उम्र क्या |

घटती जाती वो  हर साल है ||
 

सात  बच्चें  हैं बेगम  कड़क |

शख़्स कितना वो  ख़ुशहाल है ||
 

इश्क़ ‘सैनी ‘से अब क्या करें |

वो  तो  पहले  ही कंगाल है ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी

 

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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2012, 09:37:47 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2012, 09:44:13 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2012, 10:03:33 AM »
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Kya baat hai sir, bohut khoob , dherrrooonn daaad qubool kijiye.....
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Saini ji bahut khoob likha hai aap ne ...hamari badhayi kabool fermayiye....
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«Reply #12 on: August 30, 2012, 11:12:41 AM »
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Bahut Khub Bahut Mast Wah Wah Saini sahab.
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«Reply #13 on: August 30, 2012, 12:53:19 PM »
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Waah waah waah waah, ghazab, lajawaab, mazaa aa gaya padh kar. Khaastaur pe "Jurmpesha" aur "Khatoon ki umr" waale she'r bahut hi achhe lage. Poori ghazal lajawaab hai. Ye aapki ab tak ki ghazlo.n mein, sabse achhi ghazlo.n mein se ek hai. Dheron daad aur ek Rau.
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«Reply #14 on: August 30, 2012, 03:00:52 PM »
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Waah waah waaaaahhhhh.
Aap bahoot achchey tareeke  se  muskil sher bhee kah dete hai. Esme koi shak nahee kee  aap bahoot achchaa likhte hai.
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