JIS DIN PYARI NASDIQUI......Asghr

by Asghr on August 05, 2012, 05:55:37 PM
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Jis din Pyari Nasdiqui jawaaN hui thee
humaari sari gali badi pareshaaN hui thee

meri shayari pe wo tanqeed karti thee  
phir shroo pyar ki dastaaN hui thee

lougoN se humaare pyar ke kisay sun kar
uhs ki bhabi badi pareshaN hui theee

uhs shab charagahaN hee charagahN tha
uhs ke rishte ki jab zubaaN hui thee

itne mein padosan ne muje jagaa diya
abi Nasdiqui se shadi kahaN hui thee
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2012, 06:51:28 PM »
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waahh ji waahh
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2012, 07:35:04 PM »
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he he he .. bahut achhe .. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2012, 01:01:42 AM »
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last two lines me kuch change hona chahiye, varna baaki bilkul section heading(mazahiya shayri) pe fit n shandaar hai
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2012, 05:04:21 AM »
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वाह वाह
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2012, 06:18:24 PM »
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waahh ji waahh
THANKS NIRALA SAHEB.....ASGHR
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2012, 06:19:31 PM »
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he he he .. bahut achhe .. Usual Smile
SHUKRIYA TOUHID SAHEB.....ASGHR
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2012, 06:20:26 PM »
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last two lines me kuch change hona chahiye, varna baaki bilkul section heading(mazahiya shayri) pe fit n shandaar hai
THANKS SPS....ASGHR
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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2012, 06:21:38 PM »
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वाह वाह
THANKS NANDBAHU.....ASGHR
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वाह वाह
thanks....asghr
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