khelo chahe jitna, ji chahe !!!

by sarfira on December 02, 2011, 08:56:03 PM
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khelo chahe jitna, ji chahe
khyal rakh--armaa diloN ke toot na paye!

bada hai zigar unka, to kya
saafgoi niyat ki chhutt na jaaye!

ho chaalaak !tum!  sarfire magar
Kai gaye jahaaN meiN, tujhse kai aaye!

ho mazahiyat ke gar deewane tum
sambhaalo kadam, bahak na jaaye!

ho mumkeen, sil le labb, chupa alfaaz
baat kisi ko !sarfire! chubbh na jaaye!

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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2011, 10:04:35 PM »
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wah... bahut khoob ....

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«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2011, 11:05:27 PM »
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S Firaa Jee Aadaab!

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bahut khoob janab, bahut umdaa ahsaas O khayaal
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khelo chahe jitna, ji chahe
khyal rakh--armaa diloN ke toot na paye!

bada hai zigar unka, to kya
saafgoi niyat ki chhutt na jaaye!

ho chaalaak !tum!  sarfire magar
jahaan me tujh sa kayee aaye aor, kayee gaye!

Kai gaye jahaaN meiN tujhse kai aaye

Is misre ko youN bayaaN kar dijiye.. rhyme meiN bhi aa jayeNga aur
Misra thoda short bhi ho jayeNga Usual Smile


ho mazahiyat ke gar deewane tum
sambhaalo kadam, bahak na jaaye!

ho mumkeen, sil le labb, chupa alfaaz
baat kisi ko !sarfire! chubbh na jaaye!

!!
!!
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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2011, 11:14:37 PM »
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S Firaa Jee Aadaab!

Waah waah janab ... kia kahne aapke khayaaloN ke
bahut khoob janab, bahut umdaa ahsaas O khayaal
aur achchi bayaani rahi .. Usual Smile

Kafi gehre aur sanjidaa ahsaasat bayaaN kiye hai
janab... Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         



aapka behadd sukriya Parwaaz sahab--
wo asal me hum direct yahi likhte hain to jo khayal aata h vo hi likh dete hain islie--
esa mistake hota rhta hai--

ab aap jaise umda shayar sikhaye to dheere dheere sikh jayenge thora bht hum bhi likhne ka gur:)

fir ek bar dil se sukriya bhai:)

khus rahen
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muskurate rahen

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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2011, 11:16:43 PM »
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wah... bahut khoob ....

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khus rahen
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2011, 02:59:54 PM »
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khelo chahe jitna, ji chahe
khyal rakh--armaa diloN ke toot na paye!

bada hai zigar unka, to kya
saafgoi niyat ki chhutt na jaaye!

ho chaalaak !tum!  sarfire magar
Kai gaye jahaaN meiN, tujhse kai aaye!

ho mazahiyat ke gar deewane tum
sambhaalo kadam, bahak na jaaye!

ho mumkeen, sil le labb, chupa alfaaz
baat kisi ko !sarfire! chubbh na jaaye!

!!
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