---kiski Ibadat---

by killbill on December 14, 2010, 02:11:45 PM
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!!aye dost mere ab tu hi bata
       kiski karu mai Ibadat!
bepanah mohabbat apne yar ki
      ya fir ye zism o jaan hai jis khuda ki Inayat
mohabbat yar ki jisne jeena sikhaya
      inayat khuda ki jisne har pal apnaya!
aye dost mere ab tu hi bata
      kiski karun mai Ibadat!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 14, 2010, 02:48:06 PM »
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mast likha hai kb tumne

ibadat karni hai to na khuda ki kar na hi mehbuub ki
ibadat kar unn paak insaanon ki jisne tujhe duniya me laya
uss maa ki kar jisne tujhe apne khun se sincha
uss pita ki jisne tere liye har sukh ko bhulaya

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«Reply #2 on: December 14, 2010, 02:58:14 PM »
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na hi mohabbat ki aur na hi khuda ki
        ho sake to kar le ibadat zara insaniyat ki

!!kuch kahna tha usse 'nirala'
shayad dil uska bhi dhadka  hoga!!
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«Reply #3 on: December 14, 2010, 03:36:02 PM »
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bahut acha likha hai KB
lekin itni achi poem tum funny section me kyu post ker rahe ho
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«Reply #4 on: December 14, 2010, 04:08:41 PM »
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ye to aapka Badappan hai Samnoj ji jo achha kahte ho.
mujhe pata hai iske liye sabse achhi jagah yahi section hai.
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2010, 07:44:45 PM »
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never underestimate yourself... KB bhai... jab achha likha hai to likha hai... isme chhupaane waali kaun si baat hai... bas yun hi likhte rehiye aur dil mein bane rehiye... dil se door jaane ki izaazat nahi aapko...

Intezar !
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«Reply #6 on: December 15, 2010, 12:14:14 AM »
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!!aye dost mere ab tu hi bata
       kiski karu mai Ibadat!
bepanah mohabbat apne yar ki
      ya fir ye zism o jaan hai jis khuda ki Inayat
mohabbat yar ki jisne jeena sikhaya
      inayat khuda ki jisne har pal apnaya!
aye dost mere ab tu hi bata
      kiski karun mai Ibadat!!

Bahut khoob Shubash Ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2011, 03:40:10 PM »
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mast likha hai kb tumne

ibadat karni hai to na khuda ki kar na hi mehbuub ki
ibadat kar unn paak insaanon ki jisne tujhe duniya me laya
uss maa ki kar jisne tujhe apne khun se sincha
uss pita ki jisne tere liye har sukh ko bhulaya


wah kasak…
tumne jo kaha wo to mindblowing hai…
itne ache vichar hai tumhare…
keep it bachchi Usual Smile
khus raho
god bless u
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