Mera pehla RAU..

by Sps on August 06, 2012, 01:35:37 AM
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100 post hue Yoindia pe
zabardast badlaav aaya..
RAU ki taakat aate hi mano
haath me beshkimti hathyaar aaya

bahot socha , bahot vichara
Pehla RAU kispe jaaye vara
25 naveen rachnaye padhi
aur apni pasandeeda dobaara

Aakhir fasi mai,
dil aur uski khamoshi ke beech
dono hi mere kavi hriday ko
khud ki taraf rahe kheech

mere pehle nayaab RAU
ne khud hi kia aghaaz
ek hi jhatke ne
=/Hriday/= ne kar di khamosh _awaaz

*****pls dont mind , all the poets are senior and a lot better than me, its just that getting the power to give RAU was so special and so exhillerating that I couldnt stop penning it down, pls forgive me if i've hurt anyone****
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2012, 02:39:55 AM »
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This is amazing, you have gave your first Rau to Hriday Sahab. You have shown that you have good poetic skills.

Infact I am too waiting to get my power of Rau, would have given one if I had it in my hand.
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2012, 03:33:25 AM »
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100 post hue Yoindia pe
zabardast badlaav aaya..
RAU ki taakat aate hi mano
haath me beshkimti hathyaar aaya

bahot socha , bahot vichara
Pehla RAU kispe jaaye vara
25 naveen rachnaye padhi
aur apni pasandeeda dobaara

Aakhir fasi mai,
dil aur uski khamoshi ke beech
dono hi mere kavi hriday ko
khud ki taraf rahe kheech

mere pehle nayaab RAU
ne khud hi kia aghaaz
ek hi jhatke ne
=/Hriday/= ne kar di khamosh _awaaz

*****pls dont mind , all the poets are senior and a lot better than me, its just that getting the power to give RAU was so special and so exhillerating that I couldnt stop penning it down, pls forgive me if i've hurt anyone****

    i like also his( HRIDAY'S) compositions


             naa....  samajh tu khamosh mujhe aye nadaan.!
             kii hriday mein merey bhi mohabbat bastii hai.!!
             hongey aur bhi yahaan kayii suknwar achey-achey!!!
             hogaa kyaa koii jo merii hastii hai.!!


             Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2012, 08:15:53 AM »
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Aapne bahut accha likha hai..
kaabil e tareef.
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2012, 09:35:32 AM »
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good
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2012, 01:25:01 PM »
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very good
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2012, 03:00:08 PM »
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Thank you sooooooooooo much Sps ji... aapka pehla keemti RAU mere naam karne ke liye... bahut achcha lagaa... par mere liye to itna hi bahut hai ki aap mere posts padh le...aur aapka RAU dene ka andaaz bahut pyaaraa lagaa... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!


dil se jo kisi ne aaj is dil ko chhuwaa
kuch khaas ehsaas is Hriday ko bhi huwa
yun to likhte nahi chaah me paane ki rau
jab diya kisi ne pyaar se to dil khsuh huwa...
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2012, 01:46:45 AM »
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Thanks aap sabhi ko...ise sarahne k liye, Khamosh ji yakeen maniye ...apki aur Hriday ji ki poems me se mere liye chun na bahot hi mushkil tha....bas aisa hai ki maine Yoindia join kia Hriday ji ki poems tab se saari padhi hai...aur aapki maine abhi dekhi, jaane kaise itni achchi rachnaye meri nazar se bach gai.....bas yahi ek reason tha...varna aapka sach me jaisi koi hastii nahi hai!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2012, 10:02:39 PM »
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bahut badhiya
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«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2012, 04:41:53 PM »
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Thanks   piyush ji
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