MERAA HAAL BEHAAL HUA.!

by qalb on May 07, 2012, 09:05:15 AM
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                 peeeta  itna   mujhe  buraa  haal  ho gaya.
                 jism    jagah-jagah   se   laal   ho  gaya.

                 sharmaaye shareef bhee dekh sharaafat meree.
                 jail  gaye  hue  mujhe  toh  saal  ho gaya.

                 bachaa  kuch  nahin  paas khazanaa  baap ka.
                 peene   mein   daaro, saraa istemaal ho gaya.

                 rozee  mehnat  kee  kabhee  raas  naa aayee.
                 loot   ke  mulk  main  maalaamaal  ho  gaya.

                 shumaar ashiq.on mein na rindi.on mein mera.
                 kirdaar   pe   mere  ek   sawaal   ho  gaya.

                 pee-kar,  jo  ghazal  ultee  padh  di  qalb.
                 bazm  mein  kalaam  mera  be-misaal ho gaya.


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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2012, 09:18:49 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2012, 09:21:55 AM »
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                 peeeta  itna   mujhe  buraa  haal  ho gaya.
                 jism    jagah-jagah   se   laal   ho  gaya.

                 sharmaaye shareef bhee dekh sharaafat meree.
                 jail  gaye  hue  mujhe  toh  saal  ho gaya.

                 bachaa  kuch  nahin  paas  khazana  baap ka.
                 peene   mein   daaro saraa istemaal ho gaya.

                 rozee  mehnat  kee  kabhee  raas  naa aayee.
                 loot   ke  mulk  main  maalaamaal  ho  gaya.

                 shumaar ashiq.on mein na rindi.on mein mera.
                 kirdaar   pe   mere  ek   sawaal   ho  gaya.

                 pee-kar,  jo  ghazal  ultee  padh  di  qalb.
                 bazm  mein  kalaam  mera  be-misaal ho gaya.


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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2012, 11:29:14 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2012, 06:31:52 PM »
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Qalb Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab ahsaas O khayaal toH khoob rahe aur kalaam
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Amuman Sabhi Ashaar khoob rahe...
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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2012, 07:25:16 PM »
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isslie keh gaye h ki peena sehat ke lie thik chij nhi--

achi kalaam hai
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«Reply #13 on: September 11, 2012, 08:26:33 AM »
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                 peeeta  itna   mujhe  buraa  haal  ho gaya.
                 jism    jagah-jagah   se   laal   ho  gaya.

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
                 sharmaaye shareef bhee dekh sharaafat meree.
                 jail  gaye  hue  mujhe  toh  saal  ho gaya.

                 bachaa  kuch  nahin  paas khazanaa  baap ka.
                 peene   mein   daaro, saraa istemaal ho gaya.

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
                 rozee  mehnat  kee  kabhee  raas  naa aayee.
                 loot   ke  mulk  main  maalaamaal  ho  gaya.

                 shumaar ashiq.on mein na rindi.on mein mera.
                 kirdaar   pe   mere  ek   sawaal   ho  gaya.

                 pee-kar,  jo  ghazal  ultee  padh  di  qalb.
                 bazm  mein  kalaam  mera  be-misaal ho gaya.


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«Reply #14 on: September 22, 2012, 05:35:27 PM »
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