Mistri ne iit (brick)

by passedaway on November 18, 2004, 08:08:11 AM
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Mistri ne iit (brick) banai deewar ke liye
aur humne khidkiyan banai unke deedar ke liye
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Macchar ne mujhe kaata, machar mein junoon tha
khujli par aisi machi, dil be-sukoon tha
hamne usko pakda, fir chhod diya Ghalib
kambakht ki ragon mein apna hi khoon tha
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Tujhse kuch kehne ko labz zubaan par aa gaye
saath tere chalte hum uus makaam par aa gaye
mehfil mein, naam tera aaya jo hoton pe mere
to jaane kitne haath mere girebaan par aa gaye
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Tan.viir
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«Reply #1 on: November 18, 2004, 08:12:03 AM »
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wah i like the third one
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«Reply #2 on: November 18, 2004, 08:15:01 AM »
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haan nishita, uski bechare ki haddiya tootengi, kya mazaa aayega  Shocked
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«Reply #3 on: November 18, 2004, 08:32:05 AM »
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hehehe
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nikama
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«Reply #4 on: November 18, 2004, 10:52:02 AM »
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AAJ MERA AUR ISHQ NAKAAM HOGYA

UFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

DIL KE ARMAAN ANSOOON MEIN BEH GAYE
UN KE BACHEAY HUM KO MAMOO KEH GAYE :oops:  :cry:
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«Reply #5 on: November 18, 2004, 02:32:42 PM »
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happy9 happy9 happy9
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nikama
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«Reply #6 on: November 18, 2004, 02:36:16 PM »
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Talat ji mujhe ishq mein thokrein lag rahi hie aur aap has rahi hein
toba toba kya zamana agya hai
mujhe lagta hai aap ko kissi ne batayaa nahi ke desi larkey kitney kamzoor dil ke arahein hien markit mein aajkal
achaaaa

aik aur shair likha hai

arz kya hai

us ne apney hatoon ki hatheli ko kabi gor se dekha hi nahi talat
us mein kahien mujhe phenti parney ke bi asraaat hongey lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: November 18, 2004, 02:39:52 PM »
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happy9 happy9
Ab funny section main hansi to aayegi hi!!!

Dil unka kisi ne aisa toda
yahan aa ke unhone raaz khola
Kamzor dil walon dil na lagana
Dil ka khel asaan nahi hai
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«Reply #8 on: November 18, 2004, 03:10:44 PM »
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Talat ji aap ka shair parta bi nahi
lekin phir bi hasi ajati hai mujhe
kyoon ke mujhe pata hota hai ke na kuch likhney waley ko akal hia na parney waley ko
isliye advanced has ker khush hojata hoon aur ap ko jawaab likh deta hooon
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«Reply #9 on: November 18, 2004, 03:27:05 PM »
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hanse ke liye hi ye section hai bana
akal ko apni tum takleef na dena
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Beena Jain
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«Reply #10 on: November 19, 2004, 03:20:35 AM »
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Very nice all of you. passedaway ji, vo Ghalib vaala doosra sher bada achchha hei, kya baat hei sher bhhi hei khhaas aur lagtha hei jaisey koi chutkula bhhi hei.
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Talat
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«Reply #11 on: November 19, 2004, 06:52:10 AM »
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Thanks Beena jI
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passedaway
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«Reply #12 on: November 19, 2004, 08:36:11 AM »
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Akal ko hum kya zor denge talat
jabse yaha aaye hai, saari batein hui galat
Thokar khana to yun dastuur ho gaya hai
jab paane chale tumhari ek jhalak
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«Reply #13 on: November 19, 2004, 08:37:16 AM »
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lolzz talat ko kyu beech me laaya tumne
apni avtaar se bachho ko daraya tumne  Shocked
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«Reply #14 on: November 19, 2004, 10:20:04 AM »
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passedaway lolzzzzzzzzzz
nice

dunya mein 2 hi to heerey hien
aik mein aur aik tum
per tu bi kis kaam ka yaar
lolzzzzzzzzzzzz
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