Noor Bitiya Funny (Dakhni Zabaan Mein)

by Abul Asad on December 07, 2011, 01:01:57 AM
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I live in Los Angeles, Meri family Hyderabad mein rehti hai, maine 3 saal se meri bitiya Noor ko nahin dekha, woh 1 saal ki thi jab usse chodkar, yanhaan ayaa tha, Uski batain phone par sunleta hoon, aur uski pictures daikh leta hoon. Badi yaad aati hai meri bitiya.
Issi ke liye yeh Nazm likhi thi, kaafi logon ko pasand aayi hai. Shayad aapko bhi aajae.
Issay aap dakhni zubaan ke lehje mein hi pardhe to mazaa dugnaa aaye ga.


NOOR (Dakhni zabaan mein)

Dhan Dhan-Dhan Dhan, jo awaaz aai dekho
To Meri Nooru betiya, school say aai dekho

Jo shor aur pukara mehellay me chaya
Aik toofan jaisay building main aya dekho

Dastak dena uska kia bolon dekho
Darwaza jaisay ab toota, jabku toota dekho

Amma uskay bataan ittay lambe
Suntay suntay horain safed baalan dekho

Mithay mithay bataan sab ko karke
Adaon se apni phasa ti so dekho

Jawaaban sunkay dil mein muskurataon
Chehray pe magar bal daal taon dekho

Amma re uski bakwa iti bhotsi dekho
sunnay usko bheja alag hona aik khali dekho

Uskay nakhron ko to pocho nakko
Aik Aik adaa se puray ghar ko fida kar-ri dekho

Nani naana ko tu ungliyon pe nachati
Ghar mein ammi ko khoob cheekha ti dekho

Abbu uskay waaray jaatain so dekho
Faqr se meri beti bolko kitta muskurarain dekho

Iskool ko jaake kiya tamashay karti ki
Ghar main to sab ko teacharon ke jaisa daanti dekho

Meri Laddu bolkay usko bulaya to
Mereko kaddu dikha ke jaati dekho

Kudd ti, gaati, naachti aur khoob khelti
bhot bholi hai, pyaar ussay sab kartain dekho

Dil ki dhadkan jab tumhari bolay
Dhan Dhan Dhan Dhan seena bolay

Phir bi Chehray pe jab muskurahat khelay
Meri Nooru khareeb main hoingi dekho        Abul Asad
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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2011, 10:14:07 AM »
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baht masoom aur pyare ehsaas bayan kie janaab--

ek funny mood me bitiya ki masumiyat ki kya khoob bayani ki aapne--aur ye language--lajawaab.

bht bht pyara sa ehsaas hua--very touchy--

dil chhu lia aapne

thanx janaab--
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«Reply #2 on: December 07, 2011, 11:47:13 AM »
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Sarfira Saheb,

Bahut shukriya aap ke naik alfaazon ka, aap ka bada mamnoon hoon,
yeh silsila humkalaami ka jaari rakhen. Younhi aapse rabta qayaam rakhenge.
Mulaqaaten jaari rakhen.

Mashkur Aapka

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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2011, 01:17:58 PM »
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Asak abul asad sahab aap ki nazm padh kar aankh mein aansu aagaye very nice
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«Reply #4 on: December 08, 2011, 01:36:24 PM »
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I live in Los Angeles, Meri family Hyderabad mein rehti hai, maine 3 saal se meri bitiya Noor ko nahin dekha, woh 1 saal ki thi jab usse chodkar, yanhaan ayaa tha, Uski batain phone par sunleta hoon, aur uski pictures daikh leta hoon. Badi yaad aati hai meri bitiya.
Issi ke liye yeh Nazm likhi thi, kaafi logon ko pasand aayi hai. Shayad aapko bhi aajae.
Issay aap dakhni zubaan ke lehje mein hi pardhe to mazaa dugnaa aaye ga.


NOOR (Dakhni zabaan mein)

Dhan Dhan-Dhan Dhan, jo awaaz aai dekho
To Meri Nooru betiya, school say aai dekho

Jo shor aur pukara mehellay me chaya
Aik toofan jaisay building main aya dekho

Dastak dena uska kia bolon dekho
Darwaza jaisay ab toota, jabku toota dekho

Amma uskay bataan ittay lambe
Suntay suntay horain safed baalan dekho

Mithay mithay bataan sab ko karke
Adaon se apni phasa ti so dekho

Jawaaban sunkay dil mein muskurataon
Chehray pe magar bal daal taon dekho

Amma re uski bakwa iti bhotsi dekho
sunnay usko bheja alag hona aik khali dekho

Uskay nakhron ko to pocho nakko
Aik Aik adaa se puray ghar ko fida kar-ri dekho

Nani naana ko tu ungliyon pe nachati
Ghar mein ammi ko khoob cheekha ti dekho

Abbu uskay waaray jaatain so dekho
Faqr se meri beti bolko kitta muskurarain dekho

Iskool ko jaake kiya tamashay karti ki
Ghar main to sab ko teacharon ke jaisa daanti dekho

Meri Laddu bolkay usko bulaya to
Mereko kaddu dikha ke jaati dekho

Kudd ti, gaati, naachti aur khoob khelti
bhot bholi hai, pyaar ussay sab kartain dekho

Dil ki dhadkan jab tumhari bolay
Dhan Dhan Dhan Dhan seena bolay

Phir bi Chehray pe jab muskurahat khelay
Meri Nooru khareeb main hoingi dekho        Abul Asad


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«Reply #5 on: December 08, 2011, 02:39:35 PM »
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Abul Asad saheb,Mazaah ke rang mein aapki jazbaat nigaari daad ki mustaheq hai.Waqai bachon se duur rah kar aise hi shafqat ke jazbaat ubharte hain.Aapki pyaari se beti ko mera bhi pyaar...Hasan
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2011, 08:26:52 AM »
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khwaish aur Hasan Saheb,
Mashkur huye aap dono ki dad aur muhabbat ki, apke alfazon mein
chupe huvey khulus ko salaam.

InshAllah aap se rabta rahega, yeh silsila e muhabbat jaari rahe gi.

Dua goo
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2012, 11:03:45 AM »
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Asak abul asad sahab aap ki nazm padh kar aankh mein aansu aagaye very nice

Muafi Talab aapse,

Ham aapke comment par shukrana na pesh karsake
to ab khubool kijeye.

Aap ke jazbaat dekh kar is nazm ke liye
Bahut hi acha laga
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