PATNI NE PATI SE.........

by sajid_ghayel on August 26, 2008, 07:31:56 AM
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KAVITA GHAZAL KI CHOTI BEHAN HAIN ISKI BHI APNI EK ALAG KHOOBSURTI HAIN MUJE YAKIN HAIN MERE DOST BHI MERI IS MUSKARATI KAVITA KA JAWAB BHI KAVITA SE DEGE.

PATNI NE PATI SE ITRA KE LAJA KE BADE PYAAR SE POOCHA
AJI KAHIYE TO MAIN KAISI LAG RAHI HU
PATI BECHARE NE MAJBOORAN NAZRE UTHAYEE
KISI TARAH SACH KEHNE KI HIMMAT JUTAIEE
PAR AAKHIR ME THAK HAR KAR
APNI SACH_CHAIEE KA GALA GHOTH KAR
KADWE GHOOT PEE KAR MUSKARAYA AUR BOLA
ATI SUNDAR PRIYE.

                                        -SAJID GHAYEL
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2008, 08:33:53 AM »
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DOH Laughing hard

Kya baat hai.. Log safed jhooth kaise bol lete hai.. NaNaNa

Waise, ek meethi sachhaai yahan likhni jaroori hai.. Sajid ji, Funny section mein bhi aapki kalam apna jaadu bikherne lagi hai.. Aapki Yeh kavita sach mein bahut achhi lagi...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2008, 09:12:10 AM »
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THANKS MAHI TUMHE HASA KE BOHAT KHUSHI MILI.
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2008, 09:41:24 AM »
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KAVITA GHAZAL KI CHOTI BEHAN HAIN ISKI BHI APNI EK ALAG KHOOBSURTI HAIN MUJE YAKIN HAIN MERE DOST BHI MERI IS MUSKARATI KAVITA KA JAWAB BHI KAVITA SE DEGE.

                                        -SAJID GHAYEL

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Patni ko jab dekhte hai Sajte-Sanwarte hue..
Pati bechaare kitna ghabra jaate hai,
Kehte hai "Khoob lag rahi ho aaj",
Phir aaine par apni nazar tikaate hai..  DOH

Thaam kar apne haathon se dil apna,
Tez hui saanson par control laate hai...
Poochti hai Patni bechaari ghabra kar,
"Aaina dekhte hi aapko arey hua hai kya?,
Chehra apna nihaar kar aap darey hue ho kya??"  Giggle

Lekin yeh phir ek safed jhooth bol jaate hai,
Muskura kar apne darr par kaabu paate hai..
Kehte hai,
"Suno.. Lagta Main bhi kisi hero se kam nahin,
Mr. India keh kar har koi mere liye clap bajaata hai,
Aur jab bhi milta hai raah mein kabhi chalte phirte,
'Nana Patekar' mujhe dekh kar complex kha jaata hai..."  NaNaNa  tongue3
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2008, 09:56:36 AM »
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Bohot khoob Sajid ...Bohot achchi Kavita likhi aapne  Clapping Smiley

Very god reply Mahiya  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2008, 07:31:25 AM »
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EK ROZ PATI PATNIYO KI ALAG ALAG UNION BAN GAYEE
KYA KAHE BADI ZORO KI DONO ME THEN GAYEE cussing
ISI BEECH EK PATI MAHODAY GHAYEL KO IDEA AAYA
UNHONE SARE PATIYO KO APNE PASS BULAYA
IDEA GHAYEL KA SUNTE HI SARE PATI MUSKARYE love4
HAR PATI KISI AUR KI PATNI KE PASS JAKER BOLA
AAP ITNI HASEEN HAIN SAMAJDHAR HAIN
AAPSE YEH UMMEED NA THI KE AAP MERI BEVKOOF PATNI KI BATO ME AATI Giggle
AAP JAISI KOI MUJE MILI HOTI TO YEH NAUBAT NA AATI Winking
BAS PHIR KYA THA HADKAMP MACH GAYA
PATNIYO KI UNION KA TAMBHU UKHAD GAYA
APNE PATIYO KE MUH SE YEH BAAT PATNIYA SEHAN NA KAR PAYEE
JO MAHIYA NE SAMJHANA CHAHA TO CELMIRA, SAYANI KURI, POOJA AUR SHALLY NE KAR DI PITAIEE
 Laughing hard Laughing hard
MAHIYA JEE BECHARI BOHAT ROYEE BOHAT CHILLAIEE Crying
MARDO KO THA KOSA, PAR AURTO SE MAR KHAYEE
AAKHIR HAR MAN KAR GHAYEL JEE KO PUKARA AUR GHAR LAUT AAYEE icon_king NaNaNa
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2008, 11:20:39 AM »
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Tarkeeb Ghayal ji ki kisi kaam na aayi
Badi chah se patiyon ki ek union thi banaayi  icon_scratch

Par phoot to aapas main hi pad gayi
Patiyon ki ho gayi aapas main hathapaayi  boxing

Pata tha jo gaye wo doosre ki patni ke paas
Ghar laut ke ho jaaygi apni patni se pitaayi  violent1

Kar diya cancel unhone Ghayal ka idea
Saare patiyon ne "finally" thodi samajhdari dikhayi  NaNaNa NaNaNa

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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2008, 12:45:42 PM »
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CHODO YAAR AURTO KE MUH KAUN LAGE  NaNaNa
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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2008, 12:51:08 PM »
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aouraton ke munh lage koun, ghayl ji ne farmaya
biwi ne suna, jawab kuch yun aaya,
nazuk haalaton me jo lene lage bosa,
patni ne straw thama di aur inka kaha yaad dilaya
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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2008, 01:08:35 PM »
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oh yara apni biradri ke hoke apni biradri pe hi attack yaha meri madad karne ke bajay tumne bhi mauka dekh ke chauka mar diya koi baat nahi hum straw se hi kam chala lege.
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2008, 01:12:44 PM »
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  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
jawab likhte samay biwi saath thi,
warna dil to mere bhi wahi baat thi,
shayri ka silsila toda tumne,
ye dekh kar hi humne ghat ki,

pls reply in shayri only.....must be with the word "pati" or "patni"
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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2008, 07:16:31 PM »
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Patni ke peeche sher hain, saamne ye dher hain
Jaal main jaise phanse teetar aur bater hain Laughing hard
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«Reply #12 on: August 30, 2008, 07:36:37 PM »
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pati aur patni ki ladai hoi
Pati ghar sy chala gaya


Pati Sham ko fone ker k patni sy pucha khany mai kiya hai?


Patni ZAHER

Pati ok tum kha k so jana mai dair sy ao ga.............
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«Reply #13 on: August 30, 2008, 07:41:39 PM »
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Patni kha jaaye zehar, yahi sapne hain dekhte,
Andhere main ek kamzor sa teer ye pati phenkte
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«Reply #14 on: August 31, 2008, 01:55:42 AM »
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patniyon se darna humne na seekha,(maloom hua kahte hue patni ne sun liya to pati ne bhi baat ka rookh kuch yun moda)
aisa koun bewkoof kahta hai
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