Qaid mein rah kar bhi - Beete Palon Ke Saye-1998

by Ram Saraswat on December 02, 2013, 08:47:53 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 03, 2013, 01:54:34 AM »
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Waah !!! Bahaut khoob Ram ji !!! Ye 1998 ki rachna 2013 mein bhi utni hi saarthak hai aur ho sakta hai 2043 mein bhi rahe (waise badlaav aa jaaye to achchha hai Usual Smile ) ... waise teekhe chubhte huwe teer seedhe nishaane par lage in aashaar ke ... Dheron daad is qalaam par !!!!


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«Reply #16 on: December 03, 2013, 02:57:04 AM »
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Bahut umda likha hai aapne..
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«Reply #17 on: December 03, 2013, 11:15:47 PM »
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Waah !!! Bahaut khoob Ram ji !!! Ye 1998 ki rachna 2013 mein bhi utni hi saarthak hai aur ho sakta hai 2043 mein bhi rahe (waise badlaav aa jaaye to achchha hai Usual Smile ) ... waise teekhe chubhte huwe teer seedhe nishaane par lage in aashaar ke ... Dheron daad is qalaam par !!!!


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Bahut umda likha hai aapne..

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«Reply #19 on: December 04, 2013, 06:36:18 PM »
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«Reply #20 on: December 05, 2013, 12:33:24 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Prashadji
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«Reply #21 on: December 05, 2013, 01:13:57 AM »
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Yeh poem ek bareh hi aajkal ke sad political affairs pe aap ne likhee hai, bas aap hi iss ko itna dilchasp banaa paean hain.

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«Reply #22 on: December 05, 2013, 01:32:52 AM »
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एक    साहब  ने   कहा  हम  से, ज़रा   बतलाइये,   
साठ    साला    हो  गये हैं , क्या  करें  फरमाइये.

बोले  हम  उन से  कि  रोज़ी तो है अब मुमकिन नहीं,
क्यों  न  जाकर खुद  सियासत  में   जमा  हो जाइये.

हंस  के बोले क्यों मिया ,उल्लू  बनाते    हो    हमें
रोज़ी  से  क्या  है  सियासत  कम ,हमें   समझाइये.
 
है   जम्हूरियत  का  ज़माना , हम  ने उनसे यूं कहा,
है  ज़वाँ   ता उम्र   सियासतदां   न धोका   खाईये.

और  जो  अनपढ़   है  वो   सब  से बड़ा साइंसदां,
था    नहीं देखा मदरसा,  फिर   भी  कुर्सी  पाइये.


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«Reply #23 on: December 06, 2013, 01:27:41 AM »
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Yeh poem ek bareh hi aajkal ke sad political affairs pe aap ne likhee hai, bas aap hi iss ko itna dilchasp banaa paean hain.

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Bahut Umdha Mazmoon Hai Aapka.

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