SUBHA PEETA HOON SHAAM PEETA HOON .........HASAN

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Subha  peeta  hooN , shaam  peeta  hooN ,
Garche  Maye  hai  haraam , peeta  hooN

Pakki  peeta  hooN , khaam  peeta  hooN ,
Jaisa   mil  jaaye  jaam ,  peeta  hooN

Ghar  ho ya  raah -e- aam , peeta  hooN ,
Koi   bhee   ho   muqaam  , peeta  hooN

Jab   ziyaada   ho   kaam , peeta  hooN ,
Jab   na  ho   koi   kaam , peeta  hooN

Likh ke  bakwaas  ghazleiN ,peeta  hooN ,
Padh  ke   achha   kalaam , peeta  hooN

Shukr   uska   jo   muft   mil   jaaye ,
Warna  de  kar  maiN  daam  peeta  hooN

Dil , Jigar , Gurdey  sab  kharaab, magar,
Le  ke   maalik   ka  naam   peeta  hooN ,

Aap   haftay   ki   shaam   peete   haiN ,
Hafte bhar  kee  maiN  shaam  peeta  hooN

Uski   gardan   pe   sab  Azaab - sawaab ,
Le  ke   Saaqi   ka  naam ,  peeta   hooN

MaiN  'Hasan'  rind  aisa - waisa  naheeN,
Dast - e - Saaqi   se   jaam  peeta  hooN



(...and an anti-dote :
Beewi  gar   kah  de  'sirf  paani  pee' ,
Beewi  ka  hooN  Ghulaam  , peeta   hooN  )
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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2011, 04:03:28 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Waah waah waah janab kia kahne aapke bahut khoob
aur behad hi khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne.. RindoN ke
liye to aik nayaab tohfa hi de diyaa aapne ..
Aur aaj to saturday Night bhi hai...  Winking

Janab hum hafte waloN ki mehfil meiN bhi aa jaya kijiye
mazaa aa jayeNga...  Thumbs UP

Is tohfe ke liye bahut bahut shukriyaa janab..
Aur is khub kalaam par hazaaroN daad hazir hai..

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2011, 04:33:15 PM »
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Subha  peeta  hooN , shaam  peeta  hooN ,
Garche  Maye  hai  haraam , peeta  hooN

Pakki  peeta  hooN , khaam  peeta  hooN ,
Jaisa   mil  jaaye  jaam ,  peeta  hooN

Ghar  ho ya  raah -e- aam , peeta  hooN ,
Koi   bhee   ho   muqaam  , peeta  hooN

Jab   ziyaada   ho   kaam , peeta  hooN ,
Jab   na  ho   koi   kaam , peeta  hooN

Likh ke  bakwaas  ghazleiN ,peeta  hooN ,
Padh  ke   achha   kalaam , peeta  hooN

Shukr   uska   jo   muft   mil   jaaye ,
Warna  de  kar  maiN  daam  peeta  hooN

Dil , Jigar , Gurdey  sab  kharaab, magar,
Le  ke   maalik   ka  naam   peeta  hooN ,

Aap   haftay   ki   shaam   peete   haiN ,
Hafte bhar  kee  maiN  shaam  peeta  hooN

Uski   gardan   pe   sab  Azaab - sawaab ,
Le  ke   Saaqi   ka  naam ,  peeta   hooN

MaiN  'Hasan'  rind  aisa - waisa  naheeN,
Dast - e - Saaqi   se   jaam  peeta  hooN



(...and an anti-dote :
Beewi  gar   kah  de  'sirf  paani  pee' ,
Beewi  ka  hooN  Ghulaam  , peeta   hooN  )




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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2011, 05:03:22 PM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Waah waah.. Janab kya baat hai..bahut khoob...

Dili daad-o-mubarakbaad qubool farmaayen.

Aapka kalaam padhkar G B Tarz (Tarz Lucknowi) Sahab
ke yeh ashaar yaad aa gaye..jo kuchh yoon hain....

"mast sama hai raat jawaaN hai, mai hai surahi chhalkee bhi
 peene waalo aaj hee pee lo, aaj hee pee lo kal kee bhee"

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"aaj hai apana raat hai apni, aaj mana lo jasn koyee
 kal ko jaane kya ho jaaye kisko khabar hai pal kee bhee"

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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2011, 12:51:44 AM »
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Wah...wah...waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhh..!!

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«Reply #5 on: October 09, 2011, 10:10:13 AM »
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Parwaaz saheb,Aap ki sukhan parwari aur rind nawaazi ka bahut bahut shukriya.Aap ke tabsira hausla bakhsh to hai hi khumaar aalood bhi hai jisne bin piye jhoomne ka lutf de diya.Khush rahiye.HASAN
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«Reply #6 on: October 09, 2011, 10:12:44 AM »
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Subha  peeta  hooN , shaam  peeta  hooN ,
Garche  Maye  hai  haraam , peeta  hooN

Pakki  peeta  hooN , khaam  peeta  hooN ,
Jaisa   mil  jaaye  jaam ,  peeta  hooN

Ghar  ho ya  raah -e- aam , peeta  hooN ,
Koi   bhee   ho   muqaam  , peeta  hooN

Jab   ziyaada   ho   kaam , peeta  hooN ,
Jab   na  ho   koi   kaam , peeta  hooN

Likh ke  bakwaas  ghazleiN ,peeta  hooN ,
Padh  ke   achha   kalaam , peeta  hooN

Shukr   uska   jo   muft   mil   jaaye ,
Warna  de  kar  maiN  daam  peeta  hooN

Dil , Jigar , Gurdey  sab  kharaab, magar,
Le  ke   maalik   ka  naam   peeta  hooN ,

Aap   haftay   ki   shaam   peete   haiN ,
Hafte bhar  kee  maiN  shaam  peeta  hooN

Uski   gardan   pe   sab  Azaab - sawaab ,
Le  ke   Saaqi   ka  naam ,  peeta   hooN

MaiN  'Hasan'  rind  aisa - waisa  naheeN,
Dast - e - Saaqi   se   jaam  peeta  hooN



(...and an anti-dote :
Beewi  gar   kah  de  'sirf  paani  pee' ,
Beewi  ka  hooN  Ghulaam  , peeta   hooN  )

Sach Mein Saddiqui Saheb Bahut Hi Umda Likha Hai PAdh Kar Dil Khush Ho Gaya  Applause Applause Applause

Behtreen Peshkash Dilse DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAd
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«Reply #7 on: October 09, 2011, 11:46:42 AM »
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Sheba ji,Bahut bahut shukriya.Aap ka jawaab padh kar main khud hansi nahiin rok saka.Shukr hai aap logon ne isse shraab ki taa'eed na smajh kar mahez eik mazaah samajh kar enjoy kiya.Apni family ko hasb e maraatib mera salaam o dua arz kijiye.Hasan   
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«Reply #8 on: October 09, 2011, 02:30:12 PM »
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Shihab mian,Summa Astaghfirullah.Eik doosri tukbandi haazir hai jo shayed positive hai :
     Shaye ye mamnoo hai , haraam, na lay ,
     Baat  Zaahid ki rakh le, jaam na lay
                                 
                                    - Hasan
                 
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«Reply #9 on: October 09, 2011, 02:46:42 PM »
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peeta hoon.
peeta hoon bahut khoob.
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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2011, 03:32:21 PM »
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Satishji, shukriya...Aap bhi mauqay ki munaasibat se kya khoobsurat ashaar pesh kar dete hain.Meri yaadda'sht iss muaamle mein bahut kamzor hai.Tarz saheb ke ashaar se aap ne maza(rindon ki zubaan mein) do-aatsha kar diya .Bahut bahut shukriya.HASAN
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«Reply #11 on: October 09, 2011, 03:44:02 PM »
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nice sharing.
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Hasan Sahab,

Waah waah.. Janab kya baat hai..bahut khoob...

Dili daad-o-mubarakbaad qubool farmaayen.

Aapka kalaam padhkar G B Tarz (Tarz Lucknowi) Sahab
ke yeh ashaar yaad aa gaye..jo kuchh yoon hain....

"mast sama hai raat jawaaN hai, mai hai surahi chhalkee bhi
 peene waalo aaj hee pee lo, aaj hee pee lo kal kee bhee"

                                              --- G B Tarz
"aaj hai apana raat hai apni, aaj mana lo jasn koyee
 kal ko jaane kya ho jaaye kisko khabar hai pal kee bhee"

                                              --- G B Tarz
 
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«Reply #12 on: October 09, 2011, 03:56:19 PM »
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Subha  peeta  hooN , shaam  peeta  hooN ,
Garche  Maye  hai  haraam , peeta  hooN

Pakki  peeta  hooN , khaam  peeta  hooN ,
Jaisa   mil  jaaye  jaam ,  peeta  hooN

Ghar  ho ya  raah -e- aam , peeta  hooN ,
Koi   bhee   ho   muqaam  , peeta  hooN

Jab   ziyaada   ho   kaam , peeta  hooN ,
Jab   na  ho   koi   kaam , peeta  hooN

Likh ke  bakwaas  ghazleiN ,peeta  hooN ,
Padh  ke   achha   kalaam , peeta  hooN

Shukr   uska   jo   muft   mil   jaaye ,
Warna  de  kar  maiN  daam  peeta  hooN

Dil , Jigar , Gurdey  sab  kharaab, magar,
Le  ke   maalik   ka  naam   peeta  hooN ,

Aap   haftay   ki   shaam   peete   haiN ,
Hafte bhar  kee  maiN  shaam  peeta  hooN

Uski   gardan   pe   sab  Azaab - sawaab ,
Le  ke   Saaqi   ka  naam ,  peeta   hooN

MaiN  'Hasan'  rind  aisa - waisa  naheeN,
Dast - e - Saaqi   se   jaam  peeta  hooN



(...and an anti-dote :
Beewi  gar   kah  de  'sirf  paani  pee' ,
Beewi  ka  hooN  Ghulaam  , peeta   hooN  )

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah kya rind-nama pesh kiya hai
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«Reply #13 on: October 09, 2011, 04:28:50 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Siddiqui ji..Lajawaab!!

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«Reply #14 on: October 09, 2011, 04:41:04 PM »
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bahut badhiya likha hai sahab aapne dil khush kar diya....
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