Toothpaste ki Khwayish

by sansarika on July 23, 2011, 07:35:34 PM
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Hi Folks, Sitting idle on a Sunday afternoon i was wondering what the little drop of toothpaste, that we often accidentally drop into the sink, would have to say if it had a life of its own.
Well I penned the thoughts in form of an "urdu-hinglish"(khichdi) poem. Hope next time you put the drop of paste on the toothbrush you are careful to keep the sentiments of the toothpaste on your mind.

Aapke lobon ko chuna hai aur, tongue ko karna hai taste
Narm brush ki bahon mein bole, khwateen ka toothpaste.
Yeh sun nalke se behte pani ko, aisa hua malaal,
Jalan ke mare toothpaste ko brush par se diya nikaal.
Gutter mein girte toothpaste kose apna naseeb.
Bedardi duniya mein ho gaya muhim gambheer
Dhoka kia is chikne pani ne ab kaise karunga tease
Jo labon me chad gaya hota to chehra bolta - smile please.

Sansarika
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Hi Folks, Sitting idle on a Sunday afternoon i was wondering what the little drop of toothpaste, that we often accidentally drop into the sink, would have to say if it had a life of its own.
Well I penned the thoughts in form of an "urdu-hinglish"(khichdi) poem. Hope next time you put the drop of paste on the toothbrush you are careful to keep the sentiments of the toothpaste on your mind.

Aapke lobon ko chuna hai aur, tongue ko karna hai taste
Narm brush ki bahon mein bole, khwateen ka toothpaste.
Yeh sun nalke se behte pani ko, aisa hua malaal,
Jalan ke mare toothpaste ko brush par se diya nikaal.
Gutter mein girte toothpaste kose apna naseeb.
Bedardi duniya mein ho gaya muhim gambheer
Dhoka kia is chikne pani ne ab kaise karunga tease
Jo labon me chad gaya hota to chehra bolta - smile please.

Sansarika



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