unn bikhree zindagee kee bikhartee chalee gayee-2!!!!!!!

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            HASAN SAHAB ADAAB..AAP KE UNVAAN KO PAKAD KA BAITH GYE HUM



                      buss  kuchh  roz  ka  mehmaan lage.
                      phirr  kyon  itna  pareshaan  lage.

                      hai ghumm zamaane bhurr ka dil mein.
                      aur   250   gram   kee   jaan  lage.

                      baithe makkhee bhee to bhagaa na sake.
                      per    azim   uskee   shaan  lage.

                      jaane kyon bujh jaaye chiraag use dekh.
                      na   woh   aandhee   na  toofaan  lage.

                      hai   akhlaaq  uska  mokhtalif   sabse.
                      mezbaan  lage   na  woh   mehmaan lage.

                      chhayee rahee murdanee see vajood mein.
                      chalta   phirta  hua  shamshaan   lage.

                      rahe pareshaan jiskee talaash mein hum.
                      mere   gharr   se  uskaa  makaan  lage.

                   'hasan' ne toh pakad lee maarket ghazal kee.
                    qalb   kee   her  baat   abb  bejaan  lage.

                       
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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2012, 10:59:40 AM »
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            HASAN SAHAB ADAAB..AAP KE UNVAAN KO PAKAD KA BAITH GYE HUM



                      buss  kuchh  roz  ka  mehmaan lage.
                      phirr  kyon  itna  pareshaan  lage.

                      hai ghumm zamaane bhurr ka dil mein.
                      aur   250   gram   kee   jaan  lage.

                      baithe makkhee bhee to bhagaa na sake.
                      per    azim   uskee   shaan  lage.

                      jaane kyon bujh jaaye chiraag use dekh.
                      na   woh   aandhee   na  toofaan  lage.

                      hai   akhlaaq  uska  mokhtalif   sabse.
                      mezbaan  lage   na  woh   mehmaan lage.

                      chhayee rahee murdanee see vajood mein.
                      chalta   phirta  hua  shamshaan   lage.

                      rahe pareshaan jiskee talaash mein hum.
                      mere   gharr   se  uskaa  makaan  lage.

                   'hasan' ne toh pakad lee maarket ghazal kee.
                    qalb   kee   her  baat   abb  bejaan  lage.

                       
wah wah wah bohut khoob Qalb ji .
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«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2012, 11:34:19 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2012, 01:15:21 PM »
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hai   akhlaaq  uska  mokhtalif   sabse.                       mezbaan  lage   na  woh   mehmaan lage Applause

bahut khoob Qalb jee
umda peshkash

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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2012, 02:02:59 PM »
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kya baat hai qalb ji...badhya hai
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«Reply #5 on: December 11, 2012, 02:29:38 PM »
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Ha ha ha, bahut khoob Qalb bhai. Hasan saheb ki ghazal padhne ke ba'd aapki ghazal padh kar maza aa gaya.
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«Reply #6 on: December 11, 2012, 03:22:15 PM »
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Waah   Qalb   saheb  .  Aap   to   'Barjasta'   ghazlon   
ke   ustaad   hain   .  Fauran   se   peshtar   kalaam   pesh   kar  
dete   hain  .  Bazm   mein   aap   se   zinda   dili   qaaim   hai .
khuda   kare   yeh   sath   bana   rahe .
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2012, 06:06:39 PM »
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Qlab Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab kia baat hai aap toH waqai instant shayar hai...
behad khoob aur umdaa khayaaloN ko lafz diye haiN..

Mazahiyaa ashaaroN meiN toH aap umdaa hai hi par khayaaloN
meiN gehrai bhi khoob ataa karte haiN... Usual Smile

humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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«Reply #8 on: December 11, 2012, 06:10:04 PM »
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            HASAN SAHAB ADAAB..AAP KE UNVAAN KO PAKAD KA BAITH GYE HUM



                      buss  kuchh  roz  ka  mehmaan lage.
                      phirr  kyon  itna  pareshaan  lage.

                      hai ghumm zamaane bhurr ka dil mein.
                      aur   250   gram   kee   jaan  lage.

                      baithe makkhee bhee to bhagaa na sake.
                      per    azim   uskee   shaan  lage.

                      jaane kyon bujh jaaye chiraag use dekh.
                      na   woh   aandhee   na  toofaan  lage.

                      hai   akhlaaq  uska  mokhtalif   sabse.
                      mezbaan  lage   na  woh   mehmaan lage.

                      chhayee rahee murdanee see vajood mein.
                      chalta   phirta  hua  shamshaan   lage.

                      rahe pareshaan jiskee talaash mein hum.
                      mere   gharr   se  uskaa  makaan  lage.

                   'hasan' ne toh pakad lee maarket ghazal kee.
                    qalb   kee   her  baat   abb  bejaan  lage.

                       




Bahut Bahut Khooob Qalb...

Hatkar Andaz-e-Bayaan hai aapka...


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«Reply #9 on: December 12, 2012, 12:53:25 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: December 12, 2012, 01:57:45 AM »
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Qalp jee bahut bahut khoob. der sara badayi  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: December 12, 2012, 08:23:58 AM »
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wah wah wah bohut khoob Qalb ji .
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«Reply #12 on: December 12, 2012, 11:34:46 AM »
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kya baat hai qalb jee behad umda likha hai aapne
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«Reply #13 on: December 14, 2012, 04:09:33 AM »
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