VAHEE PURANAA KHEL HAI JANAB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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                           woh  shahr  ka kotwaal bana  baitha hai.
                           sakoon   ka   janjaal   bana baitha hai.  

                          
                           ganjo.n  se  bharee  iss  mahfil   mein.
                           sur    ka   baal    bana  baitha    hai.  

                          
                           dikha  kar karishma  yahaan  daulat  ka.
                           loote.on ke liye misaal bana baitha hai.

                          
                           chhadti  bhee nahin utartee  bhee nahin.
                           bechaara pee kar behaal bana baitha hai.


                           badalte  mausam  ne  jeena haram kar diya.
                           chaadar kabhee shaal(shawl)bana baitha hai.


                           kare   kya  qalb  iss   chor  bazaaree  kaa.
                           kankad se  woh daal bana baitha hai.

                    
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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2013, 04:28:28 PM »
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bahut khubsurst hazal hai.
qalb ji bahut c daad .
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2013, 04:38:58 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2013, 05:54:20 PM »
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                           woh  shahr  ka kotwaal bana  baitha hai.
                           sakoon   ka   janjaal   bana baitha hai. 

                         
                           ganjo.n  se  bharee  iss  mahfil   mein.
                           sur    ka   baal    bana  baitha    hai. 

                         
                           dikha  kar karishma  yahaan  daulat  ka.
                           loote.on ke liye misaal bana baitha hai.

                           
                           chhadti  bhee nahin utartee  bhee nahin.
                           bechaara pee kar behaal bana baitha hai.


                           badalte  mausam  ne  jeena haram kar diya.
                           chaadar kabhee shaal(shawl)bana baitha hai.


                           kare   kya  qalb  iss   chor  bazaaree  kaa.
                           kankad se  woh daal bana baitha hai.

                   
waah waah bohut khoob Qalb ji
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2013, 06:08:19 PM »
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waah waah waah waah
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2013, 06:37:05 PM »
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behad khoobsurat ghazal..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2013, 08:01:15 PM »
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waah waah waah. bahut khoob qalbji. hazaron dili daad is kalaam par.
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2013, 12:03:35 AM »
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 chhadti  bhee nahin utartee  bhee nahin.
 bechaara pee kar behaal bana baitha hai.

bahut khoob qalb jee
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2013, 01:55:18 AM »
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good work! nice ashaarz!

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«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2013, 02:13:21 AM »
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waah waah waah, bahut khoob janaab.
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«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2013, 12:47:49 PM »
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bahut khubsurst hazal hai.
qalb ji bahut c daad .


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«Reply #13 on: June 22, 2013, 12:58:01 PM »
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ganjoN se bhari mehfil meN sar ka baal bana baitha hai.... hahahahha bahut khoob qalb saaheb...
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