kamaal karte ho.....

by vimmi singh on September 30, 2012, 10:10:55 AM
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Mirza Ghalib sahab ke anuthe shair.......

Dukh De Kar Sawaal Karte ho,
Tum Bhi GHAALiB ! Kamaal Karte ho..
Dekh Kar Puchh Liyaa haal meraa,
Chalo Kuchh toh Khayaal Karte ho..
Shehar -e- Dil me Ye Udaasiyaan Kaisi ??
Ye Bhi mujh se Sawaal Karte ho Huh?
Marnaa Chaahen toh mar nahi Sakte,
tum Bhi Jeenaa muhaal Karte ho..
ab Kis Kis Ki misaal Doon tum Ko ?
her Sitam Be-misaal Kartay ho . . .
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«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2012, 10:12:20 AM »
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waah great lines kamal ka collections hai aapka.

thanks for sharing
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2012, 10:15:48 AM »
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dhanyawaad suman ji......... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2012, 11:11:20 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2012, 11:27:15 AM »
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v nice...
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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2012, 11:40:29 AM »
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Very very nice sharing
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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2012, 11:45:45 AM »
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Mirza Ghalib sahab ke anuthe shair.......

Dukh De Kar Sawaal Karte ho,
Tum Bhi GHAALiB ! Kamaal Karte ho..
Dekh Kar Puchh Liyaa haal meraa,
Chalo Kuchh toh Khayaal Karte ho..
Shehar -e- Dil me Ye Udaasiyaan Kaisi ??
Ye Bhi mujh se Sawaal Karte ho Huh?
Marnaa Chaahen toh mar nahi Sakte,
tum Bhi Jeenaa muhaal Karte ho..
ab Kis Kis Ki misaal Doon tum Ko ?
her Sitam Be-misaal Kartay ho . . .

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«Reply #7 on: September 30, 2012, 01:38:53 PM »
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Mirza Ghalib sahab ke anuthe shair.......

Dukh De Kar Sawaal Karte ho,
Tum Bhi GHAALiB ! Kamaal Karte ho..
Dekh Kar Puchh Liyaa haal meraa,
Chalo Kuchh toh Khayaal Karte ho..
Shehar -e- Dil me Ye Udaasiyaan Kaisi ??
Ye Bhi mujh se Sawaal Karte ho Huh?
Marnaa Chaahen toh mar nahi Sakte,
tum Bhi Jeenaa muhaal Karte ho..
ab Kis Kis Ki misaal Doon tum Ko ?
her Sitam Be-misaal Kartay ho . . .
adhura sher pura kar aapne kar diya kamaal
mehfil mei.n dost aapnne kar diya dhamaal
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«Reply #8 on: September 30, 2012, 01:57:30 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: September 30, 2012, 03:49:01 PM »
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Vimmy Jee Aadaab!


Behad khoob sharing ki hai jee ...
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Likhate rahiye... aate rhaiye...
Shaad O aabaad rhaiye..
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«Reply #14 on: September 30, 2012, 04:13:58 PM »
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Vimmi ji, please titles aur badiya diya kariye like "Mirza ghalib ke anuthe sher" , it will help us to find great work easily.
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