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These lines are dedicated to my sweet sweet niece.
Kitna pyar karu mai tjhe
tjhe kaise btlau mai
Ye saase tere liye h meri
tjh pr vaari vaari jau mai
Teri pyari pyari muskuraht pr
apni jaan lutaon mai
Tu jha b rakhe apne nanhe kadam
phulon ki chadar bichau mai
Man krta h samne baithakr
tjhe dekhti hi jau mai
Tu hi to h meri zindagi
tjh sang lad ldau mai
Dekhte hi tjhko
apne sb dukh dard bhul jao mai
Tu h meri nanhi pari
tjhe apne dil me bsau mai
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2009, 01:34:09 PM » |
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Khuda tumhari niece ko bohat bohat khushiya aur achchi sehat de Aameen.....Bohat pyara kalam likha hain tumne.
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2009, 03:30:33 AM » |
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very nice poppoetry ji.
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2009, 01:27:16 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2009, 02:00:12 PM » |
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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2009, 02:31:39 PM » |
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m happy....aapko pasand aaya Angel di |
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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2009, 02:34:13 PM » |
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These lines are dedicated to my sweet sweet niece.
Kitna pyar karu mai tjhe
tjhe kaise btlau mai
Ye saase tere liye h meri
tjh pr vaari vaari jau mai
Teri pyari pyari muskuraht pr
apni jaan lutaon mai
Tu jha b rakhe apne nanhe kadam
phulon ki chadar bichau mai
Man krta h samne baithakr
tjhe dekhti hi jau mai
Tu hi to h meri zindagi
tjh sang lad ldau mai
Dekhte hi tjhko
apne sb dukh dard bhul jao mai
Tu h meri nanhi pari
tjhe apne dil me bsau mai
Wah bahut accha likha hai aapne POP....  |
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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2009, 03:03:23 PM » |
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shukriya Roja di....ek baat kahu aapse...aap plz mjhe aap mat kha karo.
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Mast_Malang_Munda
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«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2009, 03:02:31 PM » |
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Jidda di kuri odan di poetry
Awesome hai ji
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«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2009, 05:11:14 PM » |
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Jidda di kuri odan di poetry
Awesome hai ji
Shukraana ji...twanu kivein pta lagya k mai kiddan di haan |
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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2009, 05:14:59 PM » |
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These lines are dedicated to my sweet sweet niece.
Kitna pyar karu mai tjhe
tjhe kaise btlau mai
Ye saase tere liye h meri
tjh pr vaari vaari jau mai
Teri pyari pyari muskuraht pr
apni jaan lutaon mai
Tu jha b rakhe apne nanhe kadam
phulon ki chadar bichau mai
Man krta h samne baithakr
tjhe dekhti hi jau mai
Tu hi to h meri zindagi
tjh sang lad ldau mai
Dekhte hi tjhko
apne sb dukh dard bhul jao mai
Tu h meri nanhi pari
tjhe apne dil me bsau mai
Wow.. Bahut Hi Cute si Pyaari Ki Poem Likhi hai aapne Apni Cute Si Niece Ke liye.. Bahut Bahut khooooooooob..
**~** Mann **~** |
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«Reply #11 on: September 05, 2009, 05:15:52 PM » |
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These lines are dedicated to my sweet sweet niece.
Kitna pyar karu mai tjhe
tjhe kaise btlau mai
Ye saase tere liye h meri
tjh pr vaari vaari jau mai
Teri pyari pyari muskuraht pr
apni jaan lutaon mai
Tu jha b rakhe apne nanhe kadam
phulon ki chadar bichau mai
Man krta h samne baithakr
tjhe dekhti hi jau mai
Tu hi to h meri zindagi
tjh sang lad ldau mai
Dekhte hi tjhko
apne sb dukh dard bhul jao mai
Tu h meri nanhi pari
tjhe apne dil me bsau mai
wah wah bahut hi khoob , nikhaar ji.. wah jasbir singh |
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«Reply #12 on: January 16, 2011, 01:39:55 PM » |
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Shukraana ji...twanu kivein pta lagya k mai kiddan di haan
Mere frnd crcle ch munde bathere ne, kuriya sirf 2 hi ne. Ohna de naal gall krda ha. tuhadi lines pdh k guess kitak tusi kuri ho kyuki eh line koi kuri hi likh skdi hai |
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2011, 03:13:04 PM » |
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Mere frnd crcle ch munde bathere ne, kuriya sirf 2 hi ne.
Ohna de naal gall krda ha. tuhadi lines pdh k guess kitak tusi kuri ho kyuki eh line koi kuri hi likh skdi hai
chnaga hai ji....ek gal dasso....hun tusi khuch likhde kyu nahi....aande roz ho te bina khuch likhe hi chale jaande ho.. ...aine berukhi kahnu ji...... |
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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2011, 04:04:24 PM » |
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chnaga hai ji....ek gal dasso....hun tusi khuch likhde kyu nahi....aande roz ho te bina khuch likhe hi chale jaande ho..
...aine berukhi kahnu ji......
Berukhi Zindgi to ho gyi hai ji. Apna dard likhn beh giya te loki rondu kehnge. Ethe a k dil behl janda. Bas es lyi aunda wa |
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