कभी अर्श कम पड़ गया - By "Betaab"

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कभी अर्श कम पड़ गया तो कभी फर्श कम पड़ गया,
मेरी हसरतों के सामने ये जहान भी कम पड़ गया.

कभी बेखुदी से जंग किया तो कभी होश ने तंग किया,
अपने मरहलों से लड़ते लड़ते मेरा वक़ार कम पड़ गया.

मेरे दिल में न थी कोई खलिश ग़मे आशिक़ी से पहले,
क़ि दिल की खलिश मिटाते मिटाते मरहम भी कम पड़ गया.

अपने दिल पे लगे दागों को अब किस तरह मिटाऊँ,
कि दिल के दाग धोते धोते डिटर्जेंट भी कम पड़ गया.

अब तू ही बता "बेताब" तेरी रुसबाईयां किस तरह छिपाऊ,
तेरा सच छिपाते छिपाते मेरा झूठ कम पड़ गया,
 

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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2013, 01:26:35 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2013, 01:46:08 AM »
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Saksena Sahaab Aadaab...!

Kia kahne janab bahut khoob bade hi dilfareb khayaaloN ko aik kalaam meiN baNdha hai aapne... behad khoob ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai janab...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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