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Zulmat ke talatum se nikalkar dekho,
Zindgi kya hai kisi aag mein jalkar dekho.

Kabhi  ahsas ke tarazu mein khud ko tolo,
baat kam pad jayenge kitne hi baat badalkar dekho.

Itne paapon ka bojh kandhe pe liye baithe ho,
Kabhi to pashchatap ki agni mein jalkar dekho.

Zindgi  aise hi gujaroge is jahan mein kab tak,
Kisi gareeb ka sahara bankar to dekho.
         
            Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab".
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Waah waah waah saxena ji.. kya kehne.. bahut khoob... dheron daaad...
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waah saxena jee..nek khayalo.N se bharpoor apki ye peshkash bahut khooob rahi..
Dhero daad qubool kare..happy9
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bahut khubsurat ghazal . bahut bahut mubarakbad.
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kya baat hai, bahot khoooob, dheron daaaaad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Zulmat ke talatum se nikalkar dekho,
Zindgi kya hai kisi aag mein jalkar dekho.

Kabhi  ahsas ke tarazu mein khud ko tolo,
baat kam pad jayenge kitne hi baat badalkar dekho.

Itne paapon ka bojh kandhe pe liye baithe ho,
Kabhi to pashchatap ki agni mein jalkar dekho.

Zindgi  aise hi gujaroge is jahan mein kab tak,
Kisi gareeb ka sahara bankar to dekho.
          
            Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab".


waaah waaah betaab ji bohut hi khoob
lajwaab raha ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2013, 05:00:39 PM »
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Saxena Jee Aadaab...!


Bahut khoob janab bade umdaa khayaalaat ko khoob lafz diye haiN aapne... bade achche khayaalaat ka muzahera kiya hai...

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe janab... Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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Zulmat ke talatum se nikalkar dekho,
Zindgi kya hai kisi aag mein jalkar dekho.

Kabhi  ahsas ke tarazu mein khud ko tolo,
baat kam pad jayenge kitne hi baat badalkar dekho.

Itne paapon ka bojh kandhe pe liye baithe ho,
Kabhi to pashchatap ki agni mein jalkar dekho.

Zindgi  aise hi gujaroge is jahan mein kab tak,
Kisi gareeb ka sahara bankar to dekho.
         
            Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab".


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Waah waah waah saxena ji.. kya kehne.. bahut khoob... dheron daaad...
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waah saxena jee..nek khayalo.N se bharpoor apki ye peshkash bahut khooob rahi..
Dhero daad qubool kare..happy9

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bahut khubsurat ghazal . bahut bahut mubarakbad.
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