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यह देखकर हम तो बहुत हैरान हो गए,
अपने ही अपनों के घर में मेहमान हो गए.

आपसी रिश्तों में  कुछ ऐसी तल्खियां बढ़ी,
जो घर हुआ करते थे अब मकान हो गए.

लगता है पानी बह रहा है इन्सां की रगों में.
तभी तो करीबी रिश्ते लहुलुहान हो गए.

कुछ तेज आंधी नफरतों की ऐसी चल पड़ी,
न जाने कितने अपने नफरतों का सामान हो गए.

कुछ ऐसा करो "बेताब" चाहे दो घडी के लिए,
अपनों के बीच भाईचारे का का सम्मान  हो जाए.

Yeh  dekhkar hum to bahut hairaan ho gaye,
Apne hi apno ke ghar mein mehmaan ho gaye.

Apsi riston mein kuchh aisi talkhiyan  badi,
Jo ghar hua karte the ab makaan ho gaye.

Lagta hai pani bah raha hai Insaan ki ragon mein,
Tabhi to kareebi rishte lahooluhan ho gaye.

Kuchh tej aandhi nafraton ki  aisi chal Padi,
Na jaane kitne apne  nafraton  ka samaan ho gaye.

Kuchh aisa karo “Betaab” chaahe do gadi ke liye,
Apno ke beech bhaichaare  ka samman ho jaaye.

   Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab"
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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2013, 08:45:08 PM »
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यह देखकर हम तो बहुत हैरान हो गए,
अपने ही अपनों के घर में मेहमान हो गए.

आपसी रिश्तों में  कुछ ऐसी तल्खियां बढ़ी,
जो घर हुआ करते थे अब मकान हो गए.

लगता है पानी बह रहा है इन्सां की रगों में.
तभी तो करीबी रिश्ते लहुलुहान हो गए.

कुछ तेज आंधी नफरतों की ऐसी चल पड़ी,
न जाने कितने अपने नफरतों का सामान हो गए.

कुछ ऐसा करो "बेताब" चाहे दो घडी के लिए,
अपनों के बीच भाईचारे का का सम्मान  हो जाए.

Yeh  dekhkar hum to bahut hairaan ho gaye,
Apne hi apno ke ghar mein mehmaan ho gaye.

Apsi riston mein kuchh aisi talkhiyan  badi,
Jo ghar hua karte the ab makaan ho gaye.

Lagta hai pani bah raha hai Insaan ki ragon mein,
Tabhi to kareebi rishte lahooluhan ho gaye.

Kuchh tej aandhi nafraton ki  aisi chal Padi,
Na jaane kitne apne  nafraton  ka samaan ho gaye.

Kuchh aisa karo “Betaab” chaahe do gadi ke liye,
Apno ke beech bhaichaare  ka samman ho jaaye.

  Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab"
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वाह....बहुत खूब....

लगता है पानी बह रहा है इन्सां की रगों में.
तभी तो करीबी रिश्ते लहुलुहान हो गए.

ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद.....
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यह देखकर हम तो बहुत हैरान हो गए,
अपने ही अपनों के घर में मेहमान हो गए.

आपसी रिश्तों में  कुछ ऐसी तल्खियां बढ़ी,
जो घर हुआ करते थे अब मकान हो गए.

लगता है पानी बह रहा है इन्सां की रगों में.
तभी तो करीबी रिश्ते लहुलुहान हो गए.

कुछ तेज आंधी नफरतों की ऐसी चल पड़ी,
न जाने कितने अपने नफरतों का सामान हो गए.

कुछ ऐसा करो "बेताब" चाहे दो घडी के लिए,
अपनों के बीच भाईचारे का का सम्मान  हो जाए.

Yeh  dekhkar hum to bahut hairaan ho gaye,
Apne hi apno ke ghar mein mehmaan ho gaye.

Apsi riston mein kuchh aisi talkhiyan  badi,
Jo ghar hua karte the ab makaan ho gaye.

Lagta hai pani bah raha hai Insaan ki ragon mein,
Tabhi to kareebi rishte lahooluhan ho gaye.

Kuchh tej aandhi nafraton ki  aisi chal Padi,
Na jaane kitne apne  nafraton  ka samaan ho gaye.

Kuchh aisa karo “Betaab” chaahe do gadi ke liye,
Apno ke beech bhaichaare  ka samman ho jaaye.

   Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab"

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Waaaaaaaaaaaah... bahut hi gehre ashaar hue.. bahut hi achchi kalaam saxena ji.. dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaaad...
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वाह....बहुत खूब....

लगता है पानी बह रहा है इन्सां की रगों में.
तभी तो करीबी रिश्ते लहुलुहान हो गए.

ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद.....
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