कभी अर्श छू लेती है - By " Betaab" (English Version is also available)

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कभी अर्श छू लेती है तो कभी फर्श छू लेती है,
मेरी जिंदगी तो पतंग है उड़ उड़ के मज़ा लेती है.

अपनी जिंदगी की पतंग को किस तरह उड़ा रही हो जानेमन,
कभी ढील देती हो तो कभी डोर खीच लेती हो.

कट न जाये जिंदगी की पतंग कहीं पतंगवाजी के बीच,
पतंग तो पतंग है यह कभी किसी एक की नहीं रहती है.

जिंदगी की पतंग को बार बार लूटकर देखो,
तुम देखोगे की लूटी हुई चीज़ सदा ही मज़ा देती है.

अपनी जिंदगी की डोर किसी अनाड़ी के हाथ मत देना " बेताब",
यह दुनिया बड़ी ज़ालिम है जो पतंग के साथ डोर भी लूट लेती है.
 
Kabhi Arsh chhoo Leti Hai to Kabhi Farsh chhoo Leti hai,
meri Zindgi to Patang hai Ud Ud ke Maza Leti hai.

Apni Zindgi ki Patang kis tarah uda rahi ho Janeman,
Kabhi Dheel deti ho to kabhi dor kheech leti ho.

Kat na zindgi ki patang kahin patangwazi ke beech,
Patang to Patang hai Ye kabhi kisi ek ki nahin rahti hai.

Zindgi ki Patanfg ko Bar Bar lootkar dekho,
Tum Dekhoge ki looti hui cheez sada hi maza deti hai.

Apni Zindgi ki dor kisi anadi ke haath mat dena "Betaab".
Yeh dunia badi zalim hai Jo Patang ke saath dor bhi loot leti hai.


            Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab"
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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2013, 08:22:56 PM »
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कभी अर्श छू लेती है तो कभी फर्श छू लेती है,
मेरी जिंदगी तो पतंग है उड़ उड़ के मज़ा लेती है.

अपनी जिंदगी की पतंग को किस तरह उड़ा रही हो जानेमन,
कभी ढील देती हो तो कभी डोर खीच लेती हो.

कट न जाये जिंदगी की पतंग कहीं पतंगवाजी के बीच,
पतंग तो पतंग है यह  किसी एक की कभी नहीं रहती है.

जिंदगी की पतंग को बार बार लूटकर देखो,
तुम देखोगे की लूटी हुई चीज़ सदा ही मज़ा देती है.

अपनी जिंदगी की डोर किसी अनाड़ी के मत देना " बेताब",
यह दुनिया बड़ी ज़ालिम है जो पतंग के साथ डोर भी लूट लेती है.

            Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab"

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