A wonderful life.........Abul Asad

by Abul Asad on January 08, 2012, 10:50:23 PM
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I look back in time, and see a smile bloom
The first time I saw her, not too long ago it seemed
 And I say to myself, what a wonderful life
 
To have spent all this time with my wife
Who like a garden tended my hurting heart
Soothing with kind words filled with balm

All these years patiently, oh so gently
Weeding out sorrow from my life
And I say to myself, what a wonderful life
 
In the warm sunset of life, to walk by my side
Glowing happiness on her face just like my life
Her hand on my hands, squeezing with delight
Saying to me…how I love thee
 
To look in her eyes each mornin n night
And know the delight, that comes at her sight
Her getting upset and giving me "the look"...
What she really says is, I still love you...

I am too old now and weak in my knees
She still loves me and laughs at my jokes
And I say to myself, what a wonderful life
Yeah, true….it is,  a wonderful life.
Abul Asad

Dedicated to my wife, my life.... a wonderful one with her
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«Reply #1 on: January 09, 2012, 03:33:44 PM »
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Good one..
few aspects of the life mentioned are amazing for me..
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«Reply #2 on: January 09, 2012, 04:56:19 PM »
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Good one..
few aspects of the life mentioned are amazing for me..
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MKV Sahab,

Thank you, Not a lot of people get the old age concept of  love
in today's fast moving world, I am glad you could relate to something in the poem, it has a lot of sentimental value to me.
Your comments are greatly appreciated.

Abul Asad
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«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2012, 05:12:13 PM »
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Wow! beautiful!

The true love is always ..."in spite of..." and not ..."because of...".
You have touched a forgotten subject.


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«Reply #4 on: January 09, 2012, 05:16:29 PM »
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Wow! beautiful!

The true love is always ..."in spite of..." and not ..."because of...".
You have touched a forgotten subject.


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Usha ji,

I could not thank you enough for your kind words and encouragement. You are absolutely right, true love is rare
and its Inspite of not because of. You seem like a person who
has great insight.

Appreciatingly yours
Abul Asad
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2012, 08:19:56 PM »
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Simply Beautiful Creation Abul ji.. God Bless U both !
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2012, 08:22:31 PM »
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Nysha ji,

Thank you once again for your kind words and a wonderful heart.
and may God bless you too

Abul Asad
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2012, 05:00:08 AM »
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iam v v v lucky to have u shah
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«Reply #8 on: January 19, 2012, 07:03:01 AM »
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OMG!!! I cannot believe who i see here!!!

Hhahaaa, Mrs Muscati... Thank you.
you're the reason i write all this,
you're my inspiration, my reason for living
you're my very life and every word in this poem
it's not mine, it is your's

when did you check this out?
It's so good to see you here!

Thank you
and love you too.
Your's lovingly
Mr. Muscati
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«Reply #9 on: January 26, 2012, 07:06:52 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: January 26, 2012, 07:13:08 PM »
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shah bhot bhot khushi hui aap ki itni khushi se bhari hairat bhari reply padh kar

Lv u always
Tc
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«Reply #11 on: January 27, 2012, 03:40:46 AM »
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shah bhot bhot khushi hui aap ki itni khushi se bhari hairat bhari reply padh kar

Lv u always
Tc
Aap ki har baat se jo khushi hoti ho jab
To aapke aane se aur kuch baaten ham par

Youn inayat karne par kiya hoga alam hamara

Shukriya
Itni muhabbaton ka, Mrs Muscati

Aapka Shah..Muscati
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