----- /// Aadat sharab ki /// -----

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raah ke kinaare pade kisi sharabi ko gaali kyun dete ho,
wo bichara aahsiq tha jiski mohabbat har pal badhti gayi,

aadat thi uski kisi ke aankhon ke samundar me doobne ki,
wo aankhen na rahi saath to maikhane ki aadat padti gayi,

ek aashiq kam ho gaya kahin to ek sharabi badh bhi gaya,
kuch isi tarah lamha lamha maikhaane pe bheed badhti gayi,

chalo kisi ka to bhala kiya un bewafa husn ki dukaano ne,
dard mitaane ke bahane aashiqo ko mai ki aadat padti gayi,

sharabi kabhi aashiq hi tha par ab chahat se koi naata nahi,
mohabbat khatam hota raha sharabiyon ki tadaad badhti gayi...


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«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2010, 08:15:24 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI     KAPIL JI.....

TERE ISHQ NE HI MERI ZINDAGI BARBAAD KI
ISILIYE TO LAG GAYI "AADAT SHARAB KI"
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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2010, 02:49:46 PM »
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raah ke kinaare pade kisi sharabi ko gaali kyun dete ho,
wo bichara aahsiq tha jiski mohabbat har pal badhti gayi,

aadat thi uski kisi ke aankhon ke samundar me doobne ki,
wo aankhen na rahi saath to maikhane ki aadat padti gayi,

ek aashiq kam ho gaya kahin to ek sharabi badh bhi gaya,
kuch isi tarah lamha lamha maikhaane pe bheed badhti gayi,

chalo kisi ka to bhala kiya un bewafa husn ki dukaano ne,
dard mitaane ke bahane aashiqo ko mai ki aadat padti gayi,

sharabi kabhi aashiq hi tha par ab chahat se koi naata nahi,
mohabbat khatam hota raha sharabiyon ki tadaad badhti gayi...


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«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2010, 05:05:45 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2010, 07:48:58 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2010, 03:13:28 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Cara ji...!!!

WAH KYA BAAT HAI     KAPIL JI.....

TERE ISHQ NE HI MERI ZINDAGI BARBAAD KI
ISILIYE TO LAG GAYI "AADAT SHARAB KI"
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2010, 09:41:23 PM »
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achha observation hai janab..wah
aadat thi uski kisi ke aankhon ke samundar me doobne ki,
wo aankhen na rahi saath to maikhane ki aadat padti gayi,

chalo kisi ka to bhala kiya un bewafa husn ki dukaano ne,
dard mitaane ke bahane aashiqo ko mai ki aadat padti gayi,

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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2010, 08:22:55 AM »
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Thanx Amit ji jo aapne is kavita ko apna waqt diya...!!!


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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2010, 02:24:53 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya MB ji...!!!

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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2010, 02:25:44 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2010, 02:26:15 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Nazar ji...!!!

achha observation hai janab..wah
aadat thi uski kisi ke aankhon ke samundar me doobne ki,
wo aankhen na rahi saath to maikhane ki aadat padti gayi,

chalo kisi ka to bhala kiya un bewafa husn ki dukaano ne,
dard mitaane ke bahane aashiqo ko mai ki aadat padti gayi,


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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2010, 10:27:31 PM »
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bhut hi khoob kapil sahab


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«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2010, 10:38:17 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Aslam ji...!!!

bhut hi khoob kapil sahab


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