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                                    hai ajab khwahish tujhe paane ki,
                                    hai ghazab tamanna tujhe chaahane ki,

                                   rasme-e-duniya mein  kiya gharq khud ko,
                                   mohabbat cheez nahin hai aazmaane ki,

                                   mit jaaye gaa dariya bhi dubaate dubaate,
                                   aadat na banaa apni dushmani nibhane ki,

                                   raah na mile gar; ho jaa shaamil kafile mein,
                                   kar justju phir khud ko banaane ki,

                                   ai 'khamosh'  har tarf fizaa mein udaasi kyon,
                                   na sulgaa aag koi abb chaman jalaane ki........!

                                    
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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2011, 06:53:10 PM »
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wah khamosh ji--kamaal ki post hai.
aapki shayri ka andaaz hi alg hai.
dard bhara ye nagma dil ko chu gai sirji.
daad dil se
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«Reply #2 on: February 20, 2011, 06:54:51 PM »
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mit jaaye gaa diriya bhi dubaate dubaate,
aadat na banaa apni dushmani  nibhane ki,


Very Impressive .... K.A.Ji !

Good work ...... dil se daad !!!!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 20, 2011, 10:38:11 PM »
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Bahut Khub Khamosh JI
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«Reply #4 on: February 21, 2011, 05:56:12 PM »
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wah khamosh ji--kamaal ki post hai.
aapki shayri ka andaaz hi alg hai.
dard bhara ye nagma dil ko chu gai sirji.
daad dil se
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thanx
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thanx nirala sb
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2011, 06:11:07 PM »
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bht khoob khamosh ji....
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2011, 06:22:38 PM »
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Khamosh ji--ye nirala sb kya hai !!
' sb ' ka matlab samjh nahi aa raha sad5
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«Reply #7 on: February 22, 2011, 06:17:32 PM »
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bht khoob khamosh ji....

thanx mei
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«Reply #8 on: February 26, 2011, 01:27:08 AM »
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Bahut Khub Khamosh JI

THANX R.A
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«Reply #9 on: February 26, 2011, 11:40:06 AM »
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maja aa gaya khamosh ji........

"    raah na mile gar; ho jaa shaamil kafile mein,
                                   kar justju phir khud ko banaane ki,

behtareen post he dear.....
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«Reply #10 on: February 28, 2011, 03:00:34 PM »
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maja aa gaya khamosh ji........

"    raah na mile gar; ho jaa shaamil kafile mein,
                                   kar justju phir khud ko banaane ki,

behtareen post he dear.....

THANX M.G
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