Aaj aaina dekha to..............................soudagar

by soudagar on June 27, 2012, 01:31:03 PM

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aaj aaina dekha to wahi purana chehra najar aaya
na koi fareb, na koi dga, na hi koi darr ka saya

aaina keh utha mujhe kahan chhupa rakha tha ab tak tumne
aaj khud se rubaru ho gya koi, khud ko khud se hai milaya

jism bojh ban gaya tha rooh par,kasne laga ho rooh ko jaise
utar kar fenk diya jism ko rooh se,aise rooh ko aazad karaya

aazad ho gai zamin aaj mere niche se udta phirta hoon badlo sa
na aaj aakhon ka dhokha ,na dhup, na aakar na koi saya hai

Soudagar


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Re: i quit...............................soudagar

«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2012, 02:08:43 PM »

title badaa confusing rakkhaa hai agar is peshkash kaa naam hai to badhiyaa par agar ghaltee se tumne quit karne kaa iraadaa kiyaa hai to main ise hargiz naheen maantaa


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Re: i quit...............................soudagar

«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2012, 03:33:58 PM »

beta jaisa dr sb ne kaha yeh title hai toh (yeh title teek nahi mujhe laga fir b) it is ok.

shayari bahut accha tha as usual. Clapping Smiley


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Re: i quit...............................soudagar

«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2012, 05:20:43 PM »

mafi chahta hoon saini sir , suman aunty ji.... its not tittle post karte samay jyada time nahi de saka isliye sirf i quit likhkar chhoda.........yoindia mein mera safar yahin tak tha shayad....aap sabka bahut bahut shukriya...... notworthy


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Re: i quit...............................soudagar

«Reply #4 on: June 27, 2012, 07:19:15 PM »

Beautiful... waise kahaan jaane ki tayyari ho rahi hai? aur kyun ho rahi hai?

Hasan ji ke words' "Yahaan member aataa hai apni marzi se , aur jaataa hai hamaari marzi se".... to aapko bhi yahaan se azaadi nahi milegi... !!!


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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2012, 03:26:56 AM »

shukriya hriday ji.....


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