<>*Aaj fir ek bar*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on February 06, 2011, 11:08:08 AM
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<>*Aaj fir ek bar*<>

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Likhne baithi hun kuch
Aur kuch soch rahi hun
Kalam hai meri khoi aur
Main bhi kahin guum hun

Padh kar teri tehreer ae sanam
Kuch hua hai mere dil me
Tere khamosh dard se shayad
Main bhi kuch gumsum hui hun

Lao aaj fir ek bar main bhi apni
Khoi hui kalam dhundhti hun
Khoye shabdon ko chun chun k
Khyalon se baahar laati hun

Aaj chalo fir ek bar main
Kuch naye geet likhti hun
Aaj fir indradhanushi rang
Shabdon se main sajati hun...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2011, 12:08:47 PM »
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<>*Aaj fir ek bar*<>

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Likhne baithi hun kuch
Aur kuch soch rahi hun
Kalam hai meri khoi aur
Main bhi kahin guum hun

Padh kar teri tehreer ae sanam
Kuch hua hai mere dil me
Tere khamosh dard se shayad
Main bhi kuch gumsum hui hun

Lao aaj fir ek bar main bhi apni
Khoi hui kalam dhundhti hun
Khoye shabdon ko chun chun k
Khyalon se baahar laati hun

Aaj chalo fir ek bar main
Kuch naye geet likhti hun
Aaj fir indradhanushi rang
Shabdon se main sajati hun...!!!

very nice ji
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2011, 12:12:40 PM »
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Bahaut khoob..
Har shayar ka kahin na kahin aisa haal hota hoga..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2011, 01:22:22 PM »
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haha udhedbun wali poetry kari iss baar.
mast hai ji mast.
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khud me hi khoya hun aaj
khuch uljha to kuch suljha

kabhi khab kabhi haqeeqat
kabhi rangeen baharon ka guchha

beth kar sochun likh daalun kuch
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achha hai re Kasakk--
sukriya
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2011, 02:16:27 PM »
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Lagta hai khuda hamaari bhi sunta hai.......mast poem Anu-di...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kisi dard ne phir se tere jameer ko jagaaya hai
Dene ko dilaasa usse tune  kalam uthaayaa hai

Shadi kisi ki bhi ho nyotaa hume bhi aayaa hai
Tere shabdon ki daawat ne mujhe lubhaaya hai

Aaj fir se tune indradhanushi rang apnaaya hai
Kuchh naye-2 geet likhne ka mann banaaya hai

Na ho tu ab kabhi bhi gumsum khayaal aaya hai
Lo dhund k teri khoyi kalam mera dil laayaa hai




<>*Aaj fir ek bar*<>

******************

Likhne baithi hun kuch
Aur kuch soch rahi hun
Kalam hai meri khoi aur
Main bhi kahin guum hun

Padh kar teri tehreer ae sanam
Kuch hua hai mere dil me
Tere khamosh dard se shayad
Main bhi kuch gumsum hui hun

Lao aaj fir ek bar main bhi apni
Khoi hui kalam dhundhti hun
Khoye shabdon ko chun chun k
Khyalon se baahar laati hun

Aaj chalo fir ek bar main
Kuch naye geet likhti hun
Aaj fir indradhanushi rang
Shabdon se main sajati hun...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2011, 05:10:28 PM »
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mastam mast reply koyu....bht hi pyara likha hai tumne...yunhi likhte raho.....love u re
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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2011, 05:21:26 PM »
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bahut khoon kasak ji mazza aa gaya.
aapki kalam mil gai.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: February 07, 2011, 04:52:58 AM »
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uffffffffffffff......Hay re…………………..so sweet and touching words
anamika ji……………………aap fir likh rahi he its
really good ji…………..likha aur bahot
bahot likho……….apko padne se behtar kaam
aur kuch nahi ……………lijiye kuch lines meri
taraf se for only u and ur ability…..


Apni kalam se ye mahki hawaye likh de
Tu chahe to lafjo me apni wafaye likh de

Tuje chu kar Aaj kalam fir he muskarayi
Tu chahe to zindagi ki nayi dishaye likh de

Ishq like de dard likh de
Tu rasm-e-ulaft ki sadaaye likh de

Har rang he basta he teri kalam me
Raat-oo ko kare roshan tu wo shamaaye likh de
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«Reply #8 on: February 07, 2011, 05:32:08 AM »
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oye hoye K mam mast mast sunder sunder likha Usual Smile
maza aa gaya ji
bahut khub
Matrix yaara aapka reply bhi mast hai ji.
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thanx
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«Reply #9 on: February 07, 2011, 06:54:45 AM »
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good one anu ji..

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«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2011, 11:52:33 AM »
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Nice Creation Anamika JI
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«Reply #11 on: February 07, 2011, 04:21:53 PM »
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mast reply MG.....Lagta hai ek dam dil se nikle alfaaz hain....... Applause Applause Applause



uffffffffffffff......Hay re…………………..so sweet and touching words
anamika ji……………………aap fir likh rahi he its
really good ji…………..likha aur bahot
bahot likho……….apko padne se behtar kaam
aur kuch nahi ……………lijiye kuch lines meri
taraf se for only u and ur ability…..


Apni kalam se ye mahki hawaye likh de
Tu chahe to lafjo me apni wafaye likh de

Tuje chu kar Aaj kalam fir he muskarayi
Tu chahe to zindagi ki nayi dishaye likh de

Ishq like de dard likh de
Tu rasm-e-ulaft ki sadaaye likh de

Har rang he basta he teri kalam me
Raat-oo ko kare roshan tu wo shamaaye likh de

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«Reply #12 on: February 16, 2011, 05:10:57 PM »
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<>*Aaj fir ek bar*<>

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Likhne baithi hun kuch
Aur kuch soch rahi hun
Kalam hai meri khoi aur
Main bhi kahin guum hun

Padh kar teri tehreer ae sanam
Kuch hua hai mere dil me
Tere khamosh dard se shayad
Main bhi kuch gumsum hui hun

Lao aaj fir ek bar main bhi apni
Khoi hui kalam dhundhti hun
Khoye shabdon ko chun chun k
Khyalon se baahar laati hun

Aaj chalo fir ek bar main
Kuch naye geet likhti hun
Aaj fir indradhanushi rang
Shabdon se main sajati hun...!!!

Very Nice Poetry .... Kasak Ji !

Very Touching Lines ..... dil se daad  Applause Applause Applause

aise hi aati rahen aur likhti rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #13 on: September 14, 2013, 02:33:02 AM »
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uffffffffffffff......Hay re…………………..so sweet and touching words
anamika ji……………………aap fir likh rahi he its
really good ji…………..likha aur bahot
bahot likho……….apko padne se behtar kaam
aur kuch nahi ……………lijiye kuch lines meri
taraf se for only u and ur ability…..


Apni kalam se ye mahki hawaye likh de
Tu chahe to lafjo me apni wafaye likh de

Tuje chu kar Aaj kalam fir he muskarayi
Tu chahe to zindagi ki nayi dishaye likh de

Ishq like de dard likh de
Tu rasm-e-ulaft ki sadaaye likh de

Har rang he basta he teri kalam me
Raat-oo ko kare roshan tu wo shamaaye likh de


bht hi mast likhe ho rajaji.......
aajao yaar wapas....... missing u ...... and i knw u will read this so do contact me as soon as possible.......
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«Reply #14 on: September 14, 2013, 02:36:14 AM »
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Bahut Khoob,
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