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«Reply #15 on: November 27, 2010, 03:48:19 AM »
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Lo Karlo baat yahaan tou sab ek se badhkar ek hain.......keep going.....me enjoying reading......
Specially you Koyal....mast hai yaar......
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

aahhhaaaaaaaa aagaye aap......... thnx for clapping humnaam
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«Reply #16 on: November 27, 2010, 03:53:12 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

kuch to hai aisa khaas ki tum fir se khilne lagi ho,
kisi ke kareeb aane ke khayaal se hi machalne lagi ho,

kuch to hai aisa khaas ki tum aaj morni ban jhoom rahi ho,
kuch to hai aisa khaas ki tum aaj baawli si ho rahi ho,

kya ye kisi ke mohabbat ka asar hai tumpe ya kuch aur,
kaho na , kiske khayaal se aaj tum fir tum si lag rahi ho...
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ab kya kahun tumhe k kya hua hai
kisiko pake dil mera jhum raha hai

mila jo uska sath jism mahek raha hai
ab to mera dil bhi bahek raha hai

ho jana chahti hun ab to sab se juda
ang ang mera uske nashe me dooob raha hai...!!!
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«Reply #17 on: November 27, 2010, 04:08:42 AM »
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Aaj fir mujhe bhi kuchh likhna hai....
Par kambakht ye car ka horn....
Abhi tou ab mujhe jaana hai....
Fursat mili tou likhunga jaroo....
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«Reply #18 on: November 27, 2010, 04:10:14 AM »
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will b waiting for ur poem humnaam......
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«Reply #19 on: November 27, 2010, 09:51:59 AM »
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kasak ji...kya cmnt krta mai..
shabd bhi to chahiye na comnt karne ke liye...
chaliye ab kr deta hu comnt
++ADBHUT ADBHUTAM ADBHUTEST++
Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: November 27, 2010, 09:59:28 AM »
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ye mast hai
mujhe naya word dena ka shukriya KB
adbhutest wowwwwwwwww
mast hai
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«Reply #21 on: November 27, 2010, 10:03:12 AM »
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aap bas issi ke layak ho
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«Reply #22 on: November 27, 2010, 11:20:24 AM »
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Ad-bhoot-am....nice hai kb ji

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«Reply #23 on: November 27, 2010, 11:51:59 AM »
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badhiya tod-fod mere shabd ke saath Koyal
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«Reply #24 on: November 27, 2010, 12:12:47 PM »
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nahi ji sandhi veeshed kar k dekh rahi thee....

Waise laga keh raha ho....."Ad-bhoot-am"
Bhoot ka advertisement hu mein.....he he he he he he he
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«Reply #25 on: November 27, 2010, 05:55:32 PM »
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hahaha...Usual SmileUsual Smile
nice:)
fir sandhi vichhed aise kro na
***ad+bhoot+am***
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«Reply #26 on: November 27, 2010, 06:00:28 PM »
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Lijiye wada tou neebhana tha......ye chand panktiyein...aapko saadar samarpit........ wave wave Usual Smile Usual Smile

Lo aaj phir kisi ki  shakl nazar aa gayee
Bhule huye un lamhon ki yaad aa gayee

Jo na socha thaa kabhi  wo baat ho gayee
Raaste  mai achanak un se mulaakaat ho gayee

Dekhte they hum  dono aplak ek dusre ko
Sudh-budh hamaari jaane kahaan kho gayee

Kadam anaayaas he badh chale hamaare
Bas ek dusre ko aatur ho gale lagaane  ko

Ess kadar kho gaye hum apne khayalon mai
Tham gaye they  lamhe  jaise humein milaane ko

Lo aaj phir jeevan mai apne bahaar aayee hai
Bharke teri saason mai khumaar  laayee hai


will b waiting for ur poem humnaam......
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«Reply #27 on: November 27, 2010, 06:35:19 PM »
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<>*Aaj Fir*<>

Aaj fir ek naya ujla roshan sawera hai
Aaj fir dhul gaya gamon ka andhera hai

Aaj fir jazbaaton ki ek tez aandhi aai hai
Aaj fir mere dil ne naya saaz koi chheda hai

Aaj fir main gunguna rahi hun geet tere naam ka
Aaj fir meri umango ne mujhe aur bhi nikhara hai

Aaj fir dil tujhe paa kar masti me jhum raha hai
Aaj fir dil k andhere kone me ek diya jagmagaya hai

Aaj fir wahi muskaan hai chehre pe mere khili hui
Aaj fir maine ashkon se naata apna kuch din k liye toda hai…!!!


Bahut khoob kasak ji..main umeed karti hu ki apka askqo se nata kam aur khushiyo se nata hamesha juda rahe...
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«Reply #28 on: November 28, 2010, 09:50:02 AM »
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Mast reply Anaam ji....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aaj phir tujhse koi mila hai
Dil me tere kamal khila hai


Lijiye wada tou neebhana tha......ye chand panktiyein...aapko saadar samarpit........ wave wave Usual Smile Usual Smile

Lo aaj phir kisi ki  shakl nazar aa gayee
Bhule huye un lamhon ki yaad aa gayee

Jo na socha thaa kabhi  wo baat ho gayee
Raaste  mai achanak un se mulaakaat ho gayee

Dekhte they hum  dono aplak ek dusre ko
Sudh-budh hamaari jaane kahaan kho gayee

Kadam anaayaas he badh chale hamaare
Bas ek dusre ko aatur ho gale lagaane  ko

Ess kadar kho gaye hum apne khayalon mai
Tham gaye they  lamhe  jaise humein milaane ko

Lo aaj phir jeevan mai apne bahaar aayee hai
Bharke teri saason mai khumaar  laayee hai


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«Reply #29 on: November 28, 2010, 06:12:31 PM »
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Thanks Koyal ji.......Haan kal mood kuchh rangeela hi tha.......saath dene ka shukriya hai jiiiiiiiiii
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