-----/// Aakhir kyun? ///----- Hriday

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kyaa aapne shamshaan me kisi laash ko jalte dekhaa hai?
jab tak laash jal rahi hoti hai, dhuwaan hotaa hai
dhuwaan khatam hote hi, sab khatam ho jaataa hai
log apne apne gharon me laut jaate hain
kuch to dhuwaan khatam hone se pehle hi chale jaate hain
kaun thaa, kiski maut pe gaye the sab bhool jaate hain
jaltaa to wo shaqs hai jo sukhi lakdiyon pe padaa hotaa hai
jab tak aag jalti hai, jab tak dhuwaan hotaa hai, sab apne hote hain
aag ke bujh jaane ke baad, koi apnaa nahi hotaa, sab bhool jaate hain

aajkal ke logon kaa josh bhi kuch is tarhaa kaa hai
kisi ka ghar jaltaa hai to log bhadak jaate hain
josh me bheed bhi jam jaati hai, par kyaa matlab in sab kaa
jab tak ghar jal raha hota hai, josh rehtaa hai
jalne ke baad baaki bas raakh reh jaati hai
logon kaa josh bhi kisi raakh ke dher ki tarhaa
shaant ho jaataa hai, so jataaa hai
aur fir intezaar me rehte hain ki ek nayaa ghar jale
josh me aayen sab, aur fir bas ek bheed banaa ke chalen

kyun aisaa hotaa hai aajkal?
kyun ye josh jo hotaa to hai par thahartaa nahi?
kisi kaa ghar jalne pe sab ek ho jaate hain
fir kisi aur kaa ghar jalse se kyun bachaa paate nahi?
kyun josh raakh ke dher ki tarhaa shaant padaa rehtaa hai?
kyun hum apne samaaj ke liye kuch bhi kar paate nahi?
kyun hum agle ghar ko jalne se bachaa paate nahi?

aakhir kyun?


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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2012, 05:10:31 PM »
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bilkul sahi kaha aapne hriday ji...
yahi reality hai.. jab tak koi issue peak par hai sab use lekar tufan machate hain.. aur fir thande padh jate hain..

bilkul aisa hi hota hai.. sad but true...

aapne bahut acha topic likha hai.. i really admire the central idea behind it..
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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2012, 05:23:32 PM »
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bohut khub kaha hridhay bhai
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2012, 05:23:50 PM »
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kyaa aapne shamshaan me kisi laash ko jalte dekhaa hai?
jab tak laash jal rahi hoti hai, dhuwaan hotaa hai
dhuwaan khatam hote hi, sab khatam ho jaataa hai
log apne apne gharon me laut jaate hain
kuch to dhuwaan khatam hone se pehle hi chale jaate hain
kaun thaa, kiski maut pe gaye the sab bhool jaate hain
jaltaa to wo shaqs hai jo sukhi lakdiyon pe padaa hotaa hai
jab tak aag jalti hai, jab tak dhuwaan hotaa hai, sab apne hote hain
aag ke bujh jaane ke baad, koi apnaa nahi hotaa, sab bhool jaate hain

aajkal ke logon kaa josh bhi kuch is tarhaa kaa hai
kisi ka ghar jaltaa hai to log bhadak jaate hain
josh me bheed bhi jam jaati hai, par kyaa matlab in sab kaa
jab tak ghar jal raha hota hai, josh rehtaa hai
jalne ke baad baaki bas raakh reh jaati hai
logon kaa josh bhi kisi raakh ke dher ki tarhaa
shaant ho jaataa hai, so jataaa hai
aur fir intezaar me rehte ki ek nayaa ghar jale
josh me aayen sab, aur fir bas ek bheed banaa ke chalen

kyun aisaa hotaa hai aajkal?
kyun ye josh jo hotaa to hai par thahartaa nahi?
kisi kaa ghar jalne pe sab ek ho jaate hain
fir kisi aur kaa ghar jalse se kyun bachaa paate nahi?
kyun josh raakh ke dher ki tarhaa shaant padaa rehtaa hai?
kyun hum apne samaaj ke liye kuch bhi kar paate nahi?
kyun hum agle ghar ko jalne se bachaa paate nahi?

aakhir kyun?


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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2012, 05:47:25 PM »
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Waah kya bat hai bahoot khoob
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2012, 07:54:49 PM »
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awesome.
just speechless
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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2012, 11:07:33 PM »
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True Words.....iss kyu ka jwaab kya hai pta nahi....shayad waqt k beetne k saath sab dhundhla padne lag jaat hai .....shayad waqt k saath zakham bhar jaate hai...shayad ek waqt aisa aata hai jab insaan sab rab par chor deta hai...
who knows.....well written hriday ji
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2012, 07:48:41 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #10 on: December 30, 2012, 07:51:00 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: December 30, 2012, 03:04:50 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Lovely ji... !!!

bilkul sahi kaha aapne hriday ji...
yahi reality hai.. jab tak koi issue peak par hai sab use lekar tufan machate hain.. aur fir thande padh jate hain..

bilkul aisa hi hota hai.. sad but true...

aapne bahut acha topic likha hai.. i really admire the central idea behind it..
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«Reply #12 on: December 31, 2012, 05:01:52 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saahill ji....!!!

bohut khub kaha hridhay bhai
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«Reply #13 on: December 31, 2012, 08:06:28 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Anmol ji....!!!

Waah kya bat hai bahoot khoob
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