"" Aakhiri Salaam "" 'Nirala'

by nirala on December 28, 2010, 08:42:51 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 28, 2010, 05:51:09 PM »
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na khat likhunga ab na koi itla dunga
mujhe lena hai gar badla apne lab hi silunga!
tume yad na ho koi purani baat lekin mai
unhi yado ki parchai tale ye umra ji lunga!
MUJHE TUMNE GALT SAMJHA NHI ISKA AFSOS
dia hai jitna kismat ne zahar khus hokar pee lunga!
wafa tumme haya tumme ada tumme samai hai
mai awaara hu naakara mile zilat to ji lunga!
kabi lash mera footpath pe hoor tum guzro
mujhe mahsoos kr lena dua uss waqt bhi dunga!!
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thanx YOINDIA
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khus rahiye sab log

bahoot umda lika nirala ji.......
ek tarannum me aapki rachna ko padha...behad prbhavshali lagi ..daad kabul karen
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«Reply #16 on: December 29, 2010, 05:32:55 AM »
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bhot khub ji wah wah
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«Reply #17 on: December 29, 2010, 08:26:45 AM »
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dhanyabaad Beqaraar ji
aapne mere iss bekaar se item pr bhi waqt nikaal kr reply dia uske liye --
tahe dil se sukriya--:)
KB ji aapka bhi dhanyabaad.
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«Reply #18 on: December 29, 2010, 08:51:14 AM »
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kya baat hai Nirala ji mazaa aagaya.
badla lene ka tareeka bahut achha hai.
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na khat likhunga ab na koi itla dunga
mujhe lena hai gar badla apne lab hi silunga!
tume yad na ho koi purani baat lekin mai
unhi yado ki parchai tale ye umra ji lunga!
MUJHE TUMNE GALT SAMJHA NHI ISKA AFSOS
dia hai jitna kismat ne zahar khus hokar pee lunga!
wafa tumme haya tumme ada tumme samai hai
mai awaara hu naakara mile zilat to ji lunga!
kabi lash mera footpath pe hoor tum guzro
mujhe mahsoos kr lena dua uss waqt bhi dunga!!
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thanx YOINDIA
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khus rahiye sab log
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«Reply #19 on: December 29, 2010, 10:43:54 AM »
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sukriya Suresh ji.
sarahne ke liye
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