""chaand jameen par hota hai"" "nirala"

by nirala on December 23, 2010, 12:54:55 PM
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ye mohabat ka manzar bhi kya khub hota hai
hoth muskarate hain dil andar hi rota hai
           aalam e mohabat ka ab kya kahna
           chand jameen pat sota hai suraj bhi raato ko hota hai
chamakte sitaron ko dekh shayd aasmaan bhi tadapta hai
oos ki bundon me dard ko doobota hai
        unn raaton ka bhi kya kahna zaalim
        angdaiyon ki chadar odhe tanhaiyon me khota hai
lamha lamha kaise gujarta hai 'nirala'
dekh ke tera niralapan kahan andaaz kisi ko hota hai
   ""thanx""
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«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2010, 01:39:53 PM »
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sachi kaha nirala ji aapne...apke nirale andaaz se kahan aapke man ka pata chalta hai
bht khubsurat peshkash ji ye aapki.....
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2010, 01:51:39 PM »
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hahahaha
K mam
aapka kya kahna.
bas yun hi rahna
     by nature seedhe aur bholi lagti ho
     pyar ka saagar mamta ka gaagar dil me rakhti ho
nirale to aap bhi ho janaab
aur srf mujhe nirala kahti ho
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man ka haal kabhi kisi ko pta nahi chalta Madam. dikhawti sansaar h bas mukhauta dikhate raho.
thanx --
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2010, 01:53:38 PM »
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Anhoni baatein tum karte ho
Khud ko tum Nirala kehte ho

Aaah Ooss ki amrit bundo ko
Aasmaan kay aansoo kehte ho

Naa nikle jiska koi matlab
Aysi he kavita tum karte ho

Chehre pe chipka k muskaan
Tum ander-he-ander rote ho
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2010, 02:10:05 PM »
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aah uhh ouchh--hehehe
Koyal Sahiban kya mast mast likhti ho aap.
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shabon ko pakad kar
 shabdon me lapet lapet kar
  kya khub karara karara waar karti ho
   betalabi kavitaon ka bahut sundar matlab samjhati ho
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thanx
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2010, 02:13:00 PM »
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Bahut Khub Nirala Ji Aur Koyal JI
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«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2010, 02:17:47 PM »
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NA JAANE KITNE GHAM IS DIL MEIN HUM RAKHTEY HAIN
KOI SAMJHEY NA SAMJHEY HUM KHUD HI BAS SAMJHTEY HAIN
WOH KYA JAANE KYA GHAM HAI JUDAAI KA
WOH TO BAS APNE RANG MEIN RANGTEY REHTEY HAIN
IS DIL KI ZAMEEN PAR DUKH KAISE BADDAL BARSTEY HAIN
HADH SE BARH JATA HAI JAB DARD TO KALAM UTHA LETEY HAIN
YEH PATHAR DIL DUNYA WALE KAB SHAYAR KA DARD SAMJHTEY HAIN
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«Reply #7 on: December 23, 2010, 02:23:44 PM »
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thank god !! mai shayr nhi bhai--
warna
""dard ke bojh se mai dab jaat
  judai ke geet hi din rat gungunata
chahat ke beej bo kar dil me
dard e tanhai ke fasal hi kutkutata""
hahaha
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«Reply #8 on: December 23, 2010, 02:50:49 PM »
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bahut badhiya hai nirala ji par lagta hai thoda or kam kiya jan tha is par..

dher saari daad kubool kijiye~
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«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2010, 02:55:17 PM »
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kaam!! janaab kaam sabhi bade shayr log krte hai aap sab karo--
hum to masti krte hain..
masti me kuch aisa wesa pesh krte hain..

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thanx
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«Reply #10 on: December 24, 2010, 12:53:11 PM »
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kaam!! janaab kaam sabhi bade shayr log krte hai aap sab karo--
hum to masti krte hain..
masti me kuch aisa wesa pesh krte hain..

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thanx
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hmm ham koi bade nhai he sahab ...khair kaam se mra matlab siddat se tha..waise kam to majdoor bhi karta hai wo bhi bada nahi hota..

kuchh share kana chahta hun apse..

"Ant is amongst smallest insect or living being but it never gives up while holding an object twice as bigger"

mere dost kam bada nhai hota na nam bada hota hai bada sirf usko karne ka jajba or siddat hoti hai~

sath rahiye or masti karege sath me abhi~
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«Reply #11 on: January 01, 2011, 12:49:47 AM »
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Abhi ji meri baato ka bura nai maniyega aap.
wo mai aise kah gaya tha bas.
dil pe nai lene ka kuch bhi.
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thanx
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«Reply #12 on: January 01, 2011, 01:01:55 AM »
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Bohat Achche Nirala Ji,.

Good poem,.
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«Reply #13 on: January 01, 2011, 01:02:20 AM »
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Good work Koyal Ji, and Sahil Ji
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«Reply #14 on: January 01, 2011, 01:36:02 AM »
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sukriya Azeem ji
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