""lahoo"" " nirala "

by nirala on December 27, 2010, 05:07:08 PM
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lahoo se kya likhte hum khat unhe
     arre lahoo to zindo me hota hai ( pyar me mare logo me nhi hota)
seena cheer ke bhi kya dikhate apna unhe
      arre yakeen to dil se hota hai
karte the baate wafa ki beshumaar woh bhi
       arre mohabbat me baate juba se nhi ankho-dilo se hota hai
kya kahe unki kasmo wado ki sirraton ka
       arre hatiye janaab pyar ke phool kasmo wado se nhi aitbar E yaar se hota hai
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thanx
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2010, 05:29:15 PM »
wah
galib ka sher yaad aa gaya

rago me daurte firne ke hum nahi kayal
jab aankh se he na nikla to phir lahoo kya hai
lahoo se kya likhte hum khat unhe
     arre lahoo to zindo me hota hai ( pyar me mare logo me nhi hota)
seena cheer ke bhi kya dikhate apna unhe
      arre yakeen to dil se hota hai
karte the baate wafa ki beshumaar woh bhi
       arre mohabbat me baate juba se nhi ankho-dilo se hota hai
kya kahe unki kasmo wado ki sirraton ka
       arre hatiye janaab pyar ke phool kasmo wado se nhi aitbar E yaar se hota hai
"
thanx
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2010, 05:35:04 PM »
Manoj ji kya khub sher kaha ji.
thanx k Galib ji ka share kiya aapne.
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lahoo ki fitrat hai zism ki chhot se
      dil ki chott se lahoo nhi aate
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thanx
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«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2010, 05:54:18 PM »
Niraala jee Aadaab

Waqai niraale khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne
Daad hazir hai.......

Likhate rahiye ...
Khush O aabad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2010, 05:20:25 AM »
Parwaaz ji bahut sukriya aapka...aap jaise haseen shayars ki nazren inayat ho jaye to kamaal ho jata hai.
"Parwaaz ji aapke comnt dene ka andaaz poore yO me sbse nirala aur anokha h..jis tarah se har line ka aap mtlb nikal kr daad dete ho wo wakai Lajawaab hota hai..""
lekin Parwaaz Miya aapko kabhi wesa comnt dene ka mauka hamare likhe pr nahi milega ''sad5sad5
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thanx
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2010, 05:53:58 AM »
bahut badhiya nirala ji..

daad dhers aari~
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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2010, 06:40:46 AM »
Parwaaz ji bahut sukriya aapka...aap jaise haseen shayars ki nazren inayat ho jaye to kamaal ho jata hai.
"Parwaaz ji aapke comnt dene ka andaaz poore yO me sbse nirala aur anokha h..jis tarah se har line ka aap mtlb nikal kr daad dete ho wo wakai Lajawaab hota hai..""
lekin Parwaaz Miya aapko kabhi wesa comnt dene ka mauka hamare likhe pr nahi milega ''sad5sad5
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thanx
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sahi kaha nirala ji....lekin parwaz ji aapke likhe ka bhi postmartum kar hi denge kabhi na kabhi....ye unki specialisation hai u knew......
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«Reply #7 on: December 31, 2010, 07:14:36 PM »
aisa nahi hoga K mam aap dekh lena.
mera postmartam nahi hoga Usual SmileUsual Smile
Thanx Abhi ji aapki daad ke liye sukriya
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«Reply #8 on: January 10, 2011, 04:08:20 PM »
bahut khubb Nirala ji.
achha hai .
thoda gussa aur kahin na kahin kuch dard ka bhi
samaves hai iss peskas me.
ya fir shayd aap kuch naya msg dena chahte hain.
sukriya
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«Reply #9 on: April 24, 2013, 05:00:17 AM »
so nice.
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