<<Aapke Chaal...>>

by Roja on November 07, 2009, 05:53:22 PM
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Chaal hum sab se chal gaya suraj
Kitna aage nikal gaya suraj

Jalte-jalte pigal bhi sakta hai
Jab suna to dehal gaya suraj

Roz ki tarah kal bhi aaunga
Aaj bhi sabko chal gaya suraj

Ser chupane ko jab jagah na mili
Kitna chehron mein dal gaya suraj


Ek badli jo pass se guzri
Rang kitna badal gaya suraj

Teh karo khwaab shab sameto ab
Fir safar per nikal gaya suraj

Dar gaya shehar ke makanon se
Waqt se pehle dal gaya suraj


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cara
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«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2009, 05:58:43 PM »
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kya baat hai roja ji.....

jab sar chupane ki jagah na mili
suraj dalne ke bahane chupa liya apni surat.
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«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2009, 06:04:47 PM »
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kya baat hai roja ji.....

jab sar chupane ki jagah na mili
suraj dalne ke bahane chupa liya apni surat.

Thank you Cara sb.... but pehli bar aapne reply nahi diya ...kyu?
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2009, 08:07:09 AM »
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Nice creation Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2009, 08:15:47 AM »
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Bahut khoob Roja Ji
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: November 08, 2009, 08:34:04 AM »
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Bahut khoob Roja Ji

Thanks Rajesh Harish ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2009, 08:49:37 AM »
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Wah bahut bahut khoob Roja dear,lovely creation.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2009, 10:00:10 AM »
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Badi khoobsurat jeevan k pehluon ko darshati aapki ye rachna Suraj k samaan jwalant hai....mubarakwaad kabool farmaiye Rojajee....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Isi kadi main kuchh lines meri bhi...
Suraj tou roj aata hai sab k liye
Apni urjaa lutata hai hamaare liye
Jeevan shakti hai kirne aaftaab ki
Jis roj se bhi SURAJ nahi aayega
Ye jahaan bus usi roj dhal jaayega
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«Reply #8 on: December 17, 2009, 04:46:08 PM »
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waaaaaah waaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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