AAYE YAA JAAYE

by surindarn on August 20, 2014, 02:29:18 PM
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ghaflat shuaar aaye naa aaye to kyaa...
mizaaj ko qaraar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

asreen-e-qafas kee zindgi bhi kyaa hai...
qazaa bahaar phir aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

saaqi tu kyun kisee fiqr mein doobaa hai...
mujhe khumaar aaye yaa jaaye... to kyaa!

nighaa-e-shauq ko husn se aashnaa kardo...
phir chaahe bahaar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

mudat huee hai humen ayaashee chorheh...
terii balaa se aetbaar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

Itnaa hee bahut hai ke badah saamne hai...
andaaz-e-khumaar aaye naa aaye... to kyaa!

hum to shamaa raat bhar jalaa ke rakhen gey...
parwaane kaa kyaa hai aa bhi jaaye to kyaa!

gar zid hai tumhen jaanaa hee hai laazim...
mere dil ko karaar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

MohanN tu shayar hai ghazlen likhtaa reh..
abb kisee ko pasand aaye naa aaye to kyaa!!

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Ghaflat = unmindfulness; carelessness;
shuaar = habit; custom; manner
Aseeraan-e-qafas = captive in a cage;
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«Reply #1 on: August 20, 2014, 03:22:55 PM »
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ghazlaat shuaar aaye naa aaye to kyaa...
mizaaj ko qaraar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

asreen-e-qafas kee zindgi bhi kyaa hai...
qazaa bahaar phir aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

saaqi tu kyun kisee fiqr mein doobaa hai...
mujhe khumaar aaye yaa jaaye... to kyaa!

nighaa-e-shauq ko husn se aashnaa kardo...
phir chaahe bahaar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

mudat huee hai humen ayaashee chorheh...
terii balaa se aetbaar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

Itnaa hee bahut hai ke badah saamne hai...
andaaz-e-khumaar aaye naa aaye... to kyaa!

hum to shamaa raat bhar jalaa ke rakhen gey...
parwaane kaa kyaa hai aa bhi jaaye to kyaa!

gar zid hai tumhen jaanaa hee hai laazim...
mere dil ko karaar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

MohanN tu shayar hai ghazlen likhtaa reh..
abb kisee ko pasand aaye naa aaye to kyaa!!

Surindar.N                 "MohanN"









nice,sir
ghazlaat shuaar aaye naa aaye to kyaa...but this line is not clear
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«Reply #2 on: August 20, 2014, 04:47:53 PM »
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Applause : clap:

Bahut khoob sir.
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WAH WAH WAH WAH
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WAH WAH WAH WAH
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v. Nice
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«Reply #6 on: August 20, 2014, 06:32:16 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bohut bohut umda peshqash waaaaaahhhhh dherooooooooo daaaadddddd
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2014, 12:40:52 AM »
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waah waah waah
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«Reply #8 on: August 21, 2014, 03:40:48 AM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on August 20, 2014, 03:22:55 PM



nice,sir
ghazlaat shuaar aaye naa aaye to kyaa...but this line is not clear
bahut shukria Marhoom sahib daad ke liye Aur mujhe bataane ke liye ke pehle sher cear nahin hai.
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«Reply #9 on: August 21, 2014, 04:15:07 AM »
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वाह....वाह....

ये हमारे दिल के ख्याल हैं जो कह दिये
अब किसी को समझ न आये तो क्या....

 
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«Reply #10 on: August 21, 2014, 04:43:08 AM »
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ghaflat shuaar aaye naa aaye to kyaa...
mizaaj ko qaraar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

asreen-e-qafas kee zindgi bhi kyaa hai...
qazaa bahaar phir aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

saaqi tu kyun kisee fiqr mein doobaa hai...
mujhe khumaar aaye yaa jaaye... to kyaa!

nighaa-e-shauq ko husn se aashnaa kardo...
phir chaahe bahaar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

mudat huee hai humen ayaashee chorheh...
terii balaa se aetbaar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

Itnaa hee bahut hai ke badah saamne hai...
andaaz-e-khumaar aaye naa aaye... to kyaa!

hum to shamaa raat bhar jalaa ke rakhen gey...
parwaane kaa kyaa hai aa bhi jaaye to kyaa!

gar zid hai tumhen jaanaa hee hai laazim...
mere dil ko karaar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

MohanN tu shayar hai ghazlen likhtaa reh..
abb kisee ko pasand aaye naa aaye to kyaa!!

Surindar.N                 "MohanN"

Ghaflat = unmindfulness; carelessness;
shuaar = habit; custom; manner
Aseeraan-e-qafas = captive in a cage;







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«Reply #11 on: August 21, 2014, 05:21:51 AM »
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bahut khub kaha hai surindarnji.....
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«Reply #13 on: August 24, 2014, 02:53:24 AM »
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Quote from: surindarn on August 20, 2014, 02:29:18 PM
ghaflat shuaar aaye naa aaye to kyaa...
mizaaj ko qaraar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

asreen-e-qafas kee zindgi bhi kyaa hai...
qazaa bahaar phir aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

saaqi tu kyun kisee fiqr mein doobaa hai...
mujhe khumaar aaye yaa jaaye... to kyaa!

nighaa-e-shauq ko husn se aashnaa kardo...
phir chaahe bahaar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

mudat huee hai humen ayaashee chorheh...
terii balaa se aetbaar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

Itnaa hee bahut hai ke badah saamne hai...
andaaz-e-khumaar aaye naa aaye... to kyaa!

hum to shamaa raat bhar jalaa ke rakhen gey...
parwaane kaa kyaa hai aa bhi jaaye to kyaa!

gar zid hai tumhen jaanaa hee hai laazim...
mere dil ko karaar aaye yaa jaaye to kyaa!

MohanN tu shayar hai ghazlen likhtaa reh..
abb kisee ko pasand aaye naa aaye to kyaa!!

Surindar.N                 "MohanN"

Ghaflat = unmindfulness; carelessness;
shuaar = habit; custom; manner
Aseeraan-e-qafas = captive in a cage;





Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on August 20, 2014, 03:22:55 PM



nice,sir
ghazlaat shuaar aaye naa aaye to kyaa...but this line is not clear
Bahut shukria Marhoom Sahib.
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