Ab bass kh'mush !

by Ricky on February 06, 2008, 06:40:25 PM
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Iss Khamoshi pe mat jana,
ToofaaN sae guzar k aaya hun maiN !!

Cheen le gaya mujhko mujhse hi,
Ya shayad khud ko hi bhool aaya hun maiN !!

Be sabab-Be wajah ab lagein mehfillen,
Wajah ae Ishrat shayad luta aaya hun meiN !!

Mehazur iss duniya sae ya huN khoya khoya,
Shayad issar ae zindagi chorr aaya huN meiN !!

Jo leke aaya, wo hai khamoshi,
ab bass kh’mush, kavish ae mehzoozi gavaaN aaya huN meiN !!
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2008, 06:43:26 PM »
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simply beautiful....
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2008, 06:44:26 PM »
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bahoot khoob Ricky!!!

iska arth samjh nahi ayya : kavish ae mehzoozi
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2008, 07:05:00 PM »
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Thankyou Punam and Pooja ji
Kavish ae mehzoozi = search of felicity
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2008, 07:16:18 PM »
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Bohat acha likha hai aapne Ricky ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2008, 03:29:29 PM »
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Shukriya Honeyrose.

PS: Kh'mush is not Khamosh but variant of khamosh . read it as "KH - mush" .
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2008, 08:37:02 AM »
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are kaya kaya tu luta aaya,
kuch hamare liye bhi bacha laya,
aaj hi times of india mai yeh front page par add aaya,
phool torhna hai mana kyoki kal V'day aaya.
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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2008, 09:44:48 PM »
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Here I am with few lines ...

Iss Khamoshi pe mat jana,
ToofaaN sae guzar k aaya hun maiN !!

Cheen le gaya mujhko mujhse hi,
Ya shayad khud ko hi bhool aaya hun maiN !!

Be sabab-Be wajah ab lagein mehfillen,
Wajah ae Ishrat shayad luta aaya hun meiN !!

Mehazur iss duniya sae ya huN khoya khoya,
Shayad issar ae zindagi chorr aaya huN meiN !!

Jo leke aaya, wo hai khamoshi,
ab bass kh’mush, kavish ae mehzoozi gavaaN aaya huN meiN !!


Good One Ricky !
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2008, 12:32:03 PM »
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Here I am with few lines ...

Iss Khamoshi pe mat jana,
ToofaaN sae guzar k aaya hun maiN !!

Cheen le gaya mujhko mujhse hi,
Ya shayad khud ko hi bhool aaya hun maiN !!

Be sabab-Be wajah ab lagein mehfillen,
Wajah ae Ishrat shayad luta aaya hun meiN !!

Mehazur iss duniya sae ya huN khoya khoya,
Shayad issar ae zindagi chorr aaya huN meiN !!

Jo leke aaya, wo hai khamoshi,
ab bass kh’mush, kavish ae mehzoozi gavaaN aaya huN meiN !!


Lovely lines Ricky ji. first 4 lines mujhe bahut accha laga.
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