-----/// Achchaa thaa ///----- Hriday

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Achchaa thaa



mohabaat   kaa   woh  bhi ek afsaanaa achcha thaa
barbaad huwaa  ek  aur  deewaanaa,  achchaa thaa

hum  unko   samjhaate   bhi   kaise  kuch  jinke liye
hum  hi  bas  bure the  aur zamaanaa achchaa thaa

waadaa  kiyaa  thaa umra bhar saath nibhaane kaa
waadon se woh unkaa mukar jaanaa achchaa thaa

tohfe  mein  hamaare  hi  likhe  huwe khat de gaye
hamaare  liye unkaa  woh  nazraanaa achchaa thaa

apne  ghar waalo ko  manaa  nahi paayi hoon main
dil  tod  jaane  kaa  unkaa  bahaanaa achchaa thaa

jaate  huwe   keh gayi  khush  rehnaa zindagi bhar
dil todkar  unkaa  aisaa  keh  jaanaa  achchaa thaa

us din  aakhri  baar  dekhaa  thaa  unhe  kareeb se
jaate huwe woh unkaa muskuraanaa achchaa thaa








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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2016, 10:44:26 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2016, 11:31:47 AM »
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Bahot khub hridayji... wah wah wahhhhhhhhh
Aapka yu baato se dil ke jazbaat ko bayaa  karna achha tha,
Apne sanam se ruthkar bhi pyar baya karne ka andaz achha tha.
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«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2016, 08:16:37 AM »
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Achchaa thaa


mohabaat   kaa   woh  bhi ek afsaanaa achcha thaa
barbaad huwaa  ek  aur  deewaanaa,  achchaa thaa

hum  unko   samjhaate   bhi   kaise  kuch  jinke liye
hum  hi  bas  bure the  aur zamaanaa achchaa thaa

waadaa  kiyaa  thaa umra bhar saath nibhaane kaa
waadon se woh unkaa mukar jaanaa achchaa thaa

tohfe  mein  hamaare  hi  likhe  huwe khat de gaye
hamaare  liye unkaa  woh  nazraanaa achchaa thaa

apne  ghar waalo ko  manaa  nahi paayi hoon main
dil  tod  jaane  kaa  unkaa  bahaanaa achchaa thaa

jaate  huwe   keh gayi  khush  rehnaa zindagi bhar
dil todkar  unkaa  aisaa  keh  jaanaa  achchaa thaa

us din  aakhri  baar  dekhaa  thaa  unhe  kareeb se
jaate huwe woh unkaa muskuraanaa achchaa thaa





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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Adil ji....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Shikha ji....!!!

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Bahot khub hridayji... wah wah wahhhhhhhhh
Aapka yu baato se dil ke jazbaat ko bayaa  karna achha tha,
Apne sanam se ruthkar bhi pyar baya karne ka andaz achha tha.
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bahot khoob, atisunder...kisi dost ki aisi hi kashmakash yaad aa gai...ekdam usi tarah ek ek cheez...achcha tha ??...achcha hai janaab! ApplauseApplause Applause Applause
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Arjun ji.....!!!

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