Achha lagta he jab manka chaha hota he,....jyuthika.....

by jyuthika on October 20, 2013, 12:44:18 AM
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♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫

Achha lagta he jab manka chaha hota he,

karte he jis lamheka intazar vo lamha mil jata he,

khatm hoti he bechaini, chain fir raz aata he,

aalam bekararika dur , karar pas aa jata he,

mit jati he pareshaniya, sukun dilme sama jata he,

achha lagta he jab manka chaha hota he....

♫♫ & ♫♫ jyuthika ♫♫ & ♫♫

♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫
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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2013, 12:45:49 AM »
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Achha lagta he jab manka chaha hota he,

karte he jis lamheka intazar vo lamha mil jata he,

khatm hoti he bechaini, chain fir raz aata he,

aalam bekararika dur , karar pas aa jata he,

mit jati he pareshaniya, sukun dilme sama jata he,

achha lagta he jab manka chaha hota he....

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nice jyuthika ji
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2013, 12:56:31 AM »
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waaah.. bahut khoob...
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2013, 01:32:48 AM »
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bhut khub .. Likhty rahiya
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«Reply #4 on: October 20, 2013, 04:18:07 AM »
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kya baat hai bilkul such likha hai aapne
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2013, 04:27:56 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 20, 2013, 07:45:29 AM »
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So nice.
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«Reply #7 on: October 21, 2013, 04:52:56 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2013, 08:09:16 PM »
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thank you very much to all of you. its my happiness.
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2013, 08:13:53 PM »
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Bahut Khub jyuthika Sis


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2013, 08:20:08 PM »
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thanks again
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2013, 08:42:52 PM »
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nice lines jyuthika ji very nice
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«Reply #12 on: October 24, 2013, 12:34:12 AM »
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thank you very much
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