~~~~~~~~~~~Achhi Barish ~~~~~~~

by ALAM BURQ on November 25, 2006, 08:46:20 PM
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~~~~~~~~~~~Achhi Barish ~~~~~~~


Itni namdeedah si, bersi hay yeh, kaisi bearish
Kia taalluq tha,meri aankh say, achhi bearish !

Tum bhi ho,raat bhi, mosam ka,-- gulabi cehra
Or phir oos pe , qayamet ho, ghazab ki bearish

Yoon to mosam ki, her ik rutt hi, suhani tehri
Perbat-e-ishq pe,-- hoti nahi, thandi bearish

Musk-o-amber ki, he kushboo k faza, -nikhri he
Oskay haathon ki hina choom kay guzri bearish

Ji main aata he, ke ankhon main ,saja ker rekhlon
Aa kay tehri hay, meri aankh main, piyasi bearish

Tham gaieen hain, kahin door hawain ,derr say
BURQ ki goonj main, dekhi na thi ,aaisi bearish
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«Reply #1 on: November 26, 2006, 11:25:06 AM »
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Moving it to Miscellaneous section.

You are welcome to Yoindia. If you have any problem regarding posting your poems in appropriate sections, please ask for help !

Yoindia Monitor Talat
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #2 on: November 26, 2006, 11:48:27 AM »
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very nice indeed alam ji .............welcome to the wonderful world of yoindia.
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ALAM BURQ
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«Reply #3 on: November 27, 2006, 03:03:27 PM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
Moving it to Miscellaneous section.

You are welcome to Yoindia. If you have any problem regarding posting your poems in appropriate sections, please ask for help !

Yoindia Monitor Talat


Dear Mr Tlat
I do not understand why you move this in miscellaneous section, I have write GHAZL and also post this in Ghazal section. Please inform me that from where a mistake taken by me.
Hope you will help me

Thanks
Alam Burq
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: November 27, 2006, 03:40:33 PM »
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Well Mr. ALAM BURQ :

1. I am not Mr. ...I am a MISS !!!

2. You might have written a ghazal (I could not judge that it was a ghazal and not a simple poetry), but unfortunately you had posted all your poems in Shayari-e-Dost (Friendship Poetry) forum !! So, i moved it here...but if you want, i can move your ghazals to Ghazal section. !!

You can check again that you had posted all your poems in Shayari-e-Dost section by going to this link, where all your threads show the MOVED sign !!!

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/shairy-e-dost-friendship-poetry-vf52.html

Thanks !!

Talat
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«Reply #5 on: November 28, 2006, 06:12:16 AM »
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hmmmmmm serious topic goin on...............


hoti hai kitni acchi barish ki barasti bunde
is baat ki ahmiyat ko jame hue ashk jaante hai

...................@fahi@....................
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ALAM BURQ
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«Reply #6 on: November 28, 2006, 02:51:47 PM »
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Well Mr. ALAM BURQ :

1. I am not Mr. ...I am a MISS !!!

2. You might have written a ghazal (I could not judge that it was a ghazal and not a simple poetry), but unfortunately you had posted all your poems in Shayari-e-Dost (Friendship Poetry) forum !! So, i moved it here...but if you want, i can move your ghazals to Ghazal section. !!

You can check again that you had posted all your poems in Shayari-e-Dost section by going to this link, where all your threads show the MOVED sign !!!

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/shairy-e-dost-friendship-poetry-vf52.html

Thanks !!

Talat


Miss Talat
Thanks for your kind reply, sorry for my mistake that i call you Mr.......
Kindly move my all posts in " GHAZAL " section i will post next time in this section

Thanks for your good cooperation and Appreciation
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