Adab ke 2 - Sher

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मेरा तबीब मुझको पिलाता है बार-बार,
इख्लास घोल-घोल दवा के ख़ुराक में।

बीमार कह रहा है कि 'मैं लाइलाज हूँ',
बेकार क्यूँ पड़ा है शिफ़ा के फ़िराक़ में।

'अदब'
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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2013, 10:10:51 PM »
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मेरा तबीब मुझको पिलाता है बार-बार,
इख्लास घोल-घोल दवा के ख़ुराक में।

बीमार कह रहा है कि 'मैं लाइलाज हूँ',
बेकार क्यूँ पड़ा है शिफ़ा के फ़िराक़ में।

'अदब'

Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2013, 10:39:40 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waaaah. bahut khoob..
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2013, 11:51:21 PM »
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मेरा तबीब मुझको पिलाता है बार-बार,
इख्लास घोल-घोल दवा के ख़ुराक में।

बीमार कह रहा है कि 'मैं लाइलाज हूँ',
बेकार क्यूँ पड़ा है शिफ़ा के फ़िराक़ में।

'अदब'


waah waah kya umda khyaal hai
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«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2013, 01:26:21 AM »
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मेरा तबीब मुझको पिलाता है बार-बार,
इख्लास घोल-घोल दवा के ख़ुराक में।
wah wah wah .......! waise 'ikhlaas'ki topic pe ek lambi taqreer ho sakti hai
बीमार कह रहा है कि 'मैं लाइलाज हूँ',
बेकार क्यूँ पड़ा है शिफ़ा के फ़िराक़ में।
kisi khoobsoorat doctor ka chakkar wakkar to nahin kyon doctor pandey sahab Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

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bahut khoob.......!
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«Reply #5 on: July 05, 2013, 03:14:58 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: July 05, 2013, 03:58:39 AM »
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Pandey Jee Aadaab ...!


Gazab ke ashaar kahe haiN janab... behad khoob aur umdaa..
Dono hi ashaar laa jawaab rahe ...
Aik sher aapki kavish ke naam ...


Jeete jee na dhuNd paye hum apne wajood ko
Kya dhuNd loNge tum meri bujhti raak meiN


Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye ...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez ...

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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2013, 08:45:05 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.

Shukriya Bhai Advo.RavinderaRavi ji...!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2013, 07:26:45 PM »
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bahut khoob.......!

Shukriya Sheba ji, abhi tak to koi chakkar wakkar nahin hai..!! Aage ke bare men kya kahun aapki khidmat men pesh karta hoon 2 sher...!!

हुस्न की तौफ़ीक़ ठहरी बेनियाज़ी,
बदगुमाँ सारा ज़माना क्या कहूँ ..!!

दिल के कारोबार में घाटा ही है,
ये तिज़ारत ज़ालिमाना क्या कहूँ ...!!

आपका 'अदब'
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«Reply #9 on: July 05, 2013, 07:41:05 PM »
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Shukriya Bhai Advo.RavinderaRavi ji...!!
Ur Welcome Bro.
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«Reply #10 on: July 05, 2013, 07:44:23 PM »
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Pandey Jee Aadaab ...!


Gazab ke ashaar kahe haiN janab... behad khoob aur umdaa..
Dono hi ashaar laa jawaab rahe ...
Aik sher aapki kavish ke naam ...


Jeete jee na dhuNd paye hum apne wajood ko
Kya dhuNd loNge tum meri bujhti raak meiN


Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye ...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez ...



Aadaab ParwaaZ Bhai...!!

ParwaaZ bhai hausla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya ...!!
Behtareen sher farmaya... Dili daad-o-mubaraqbaad...!!

Pesh hai ek sher aapki khidmat men:

Taseer bhi samjha nahin mere azaar ki,
Deta hai jahar mujko dawa ke hisaab me..!!

Aapka 'Adab'

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«Reply #11 on: July 05, 2013, 11:36:28 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob

Bahot bahot shukriya Dr. Saini sahab...!!
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waah waah kya umda khyaal hai
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Tahe-dil se bahot bahot shukriya Sahal Bhai...!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 05, 2013, 11:40:14 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waaaah. bahut khoob..

Ashq ji aapka tahe-dil se shukriya...!!

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«Reply #14 on: July 05, 2013, 11:41:40 PM »
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मेरा तबीब मुझको पिलाता है बार-बार,
इख्लास घोल-घोल दवा के ख़ुराक में।

बीमार कह रहा है कि 'मैं लाइलाज हूँ',
बेकार क्यूँ पड़ा है शिफ़ा के फ़िराक़ में।

'अदब'


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