~~Aey Dost~~

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Woh Mujhe Khushyion Men To Shariq Rakhta Hai
Par Naa Jaane Kyun Shariq-e-Gham Nahi Rakhta.
 
Yun Toot Ta Rehta Hai Pal Pal Andher Se Magar
Phir Bhi Aankhon Ko, Zara Bhi Nam Nahi Rakhta.
 
Koi To Jaakar Zara Us Jaan Se Pyare Ko Bata De
Ki Ek Sa Mizaj To,  Koi Bhi Mausam Nahi Rakhta.
 
Maar Hi Na Dale Kahi Humko Khamoshiyan Teri
Yun B To Bhala Koi Apno Pe Sitam Nahi Rakhta.
 
Aey Dost Ja Zara Usse Bhi Le Tu Kuch Nasihatein
Jo Sab Khokar Bhi Hauslon Ko Kham Nahi Rakhta.


Kham..Kachcha

                 ~Shihab~
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«Reply #1 on: April 29, 2010, 02:40:20 PM »
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Koi To Jaakar Zara Us Jaan Se Pyare Ko Bata De
Ki Ek Sa Mizaj To,  Koi Bhi Mausam Nahi Rakhta.
 
wah bhai wah shihab sahab kya kahene .. qoute kiya howa ashar to bus kya kahe bahoth qoob ..dad hazir hai bhai qubool karen ...allah tumhe khush rakhe..


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«Reply #2 on: April 29, 2010, 02:44:44 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah...

Bahut bahut Khoob Majid Bhai..

Humesha Ki tarah Lajawaab!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: April 29, 2010, 02:46:13 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai               Shihab ji.......


"Aey Dost" tu kyun nahi samajhta
meh apne gham tujko bata nahi sakhta
mana ek sa mizaj koi bhi mausam nahi rakhta
par meri jaan har mausam mein
khush rahene ka hausla meh rakhta..........
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«Reply #4 on: April 29, 2010, 03:22:21 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne Shihab ji. Wah! kya kehne. Ek ek shabd jaise saja hua ho. Aapke har peshkash ki tarah ye bhi chhu gayi hai dil ko. Bahut khoob likha hai. Bahut khoob. Kuch hamare bhi dil ne chaha ki aapki is kavita k jawab me kuch likhen. Likhe bina raha nahi gaya isliye likh rahen hain...


aye mere dost! rishtey hote hi itne khooburat hain,
ki apno ke aankhon me aansu nahi dekhe jate hain,
har dard har aansoo ko chhipate hain hum hamesha,
saare ghum apne chhipake apno k saamne muskuraate hain...
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«Reply #5 on: April 29, 2010, 04:34:33 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut bahaut khoob Shihab Bhaijan.. Applause Applause Allah behad khush rakhe apko, yeh dua hai Rahim ki..dil se...
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«Reply #6 on: April 29, 2010, 09:11:17 PM »
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Very Very Gud Shihab ..................

Very gud creation !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2010, 04:55:44 AM »
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       Behad khoobsurat likha hai shihab ji.
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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2010, 05:02:41 AM »
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Bahot khubsurat ghazal likhi hai Shihab bhai. Dil ke ahsaasaat ko lafzon ki shakl mein bade purkashish andaaz mein pesh kiya hai. Marhaba. Khush rahiye.
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«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2010, 05:05:35 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:bahut umda peshkash!!!

TOOT JAYE MAGAR JHUKTA NAHI TOOFAN -O-QAHAR ME
YE WOH SHAKHS HAI JO SHER KA JIGAR RAKHTA HAI
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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2010, 09:14:48 AM »
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Achha kalaam hai aapka Shihab-bhai.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aey Dost khushiyen he sab-k-sang baant-te hain hum
Dost he kya hua wo dost jo baant le dost se apne Gam



Woh Mujhe Khushyion Men To Shariq Rakhta Hai
Par Naa Jaane Kyun Shariq-e-Gham Nahi Rakhta.
 
Yun Toot Ta Rehta Hai Pal Pal Andher Se Magar
Phir Bhi Aankhon Ko, Zara Bhi Nam Nahi Rakhta.
 
Koi To Jaakar Zara Us Jaan Se Pyare Ko Bata De
Ki Ek Sa Mizaj To,  Koi Bhi Mausam Nahi Rakhta.
 
Maar Hi Na Dale Kahi Humko Khamoshiyan Teri
Yun B To Bhala Koi Apno Pe Sitam Nahi Rakhta.
 
Aey Dost Ja Zara Usse Bhi Le Tu Kuch Nasihatein
Jo Sab Khokar Bhi Hauslon Ko Kham Nahi Rakhta.


Kham..Kachcha

                 ~Shihab~

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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2010, 09:28:12 AM »
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Wah Shihab ji aankh bhar aayi aapke kavita padke.bahut gaherai,dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.Cara ji,Kapil ji,Mamta ji,Koyal ji aap sabhi ne kamaal ke likha.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #12 on: April 30, 2010, 10:26:44 AM »
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Thanks Madhu-di....
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«Reply #13 on: April 30, 2010, 10:51:47 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Wah Shihab ji aankh bhar aayi aapke kavita padke.bahut gaherai,dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.Cara ji,Kapil ji,Mamta ji,Koyal ji aap sabhi ne kamaal ke likha.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2010, 11:24:38 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai shihab ji aapne.
 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley.

kahaan aise dost dhoondhen jo hon khuda ke bande.
koi khud hi dhoondh le aisi koi nazar nahin rakhtaa.
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