Ajnabi do (NM)

by vb on September 20, 2010, 04:27:16 PM
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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2010, 05:00:19 PM »
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VB jee Aadaab!

Aapki nayi peshkash nazar huyi kafi achchi lagi hme..
Aap ahsaasoN ko behad achche lafz dete hai daad janab..

Likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye......         





Ajnabi do, kahin rastay main milay hain aisay
Chalay hain saath, magar hont silay hain jaisay


Hont khamosh, par eshas so nahi saktay
Baat kartay bhe nahi, baat samajh letay hain.. Waah jee kia baat hai bahut khoob:)         

Hath ne haath ko ik pal k liyay thaam liya
Ake lamhay main zamana he guzar jata hay
Kafi tochi thought hai daad Usual Smile         


Dharkanen taze huve jaa rahi hain ku aakhir
Door rastay pay ik do-raaha nazar ata hay

This one os realy mindblowing... Usual Smile HazaaroN daad janab is par Usual Smile         

Kafi achche ahsaas kahe hai ... Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         




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«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2010, 05:35:15 PM »
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Ajnabi do, kahin rastay main milay hain aisay
Chalay hain saath, magar hont silay hain jaisay

Aankh utheti hay tu dheeray say jhuka letay hain
Dar hay dono ko kahin nazar na milnay paayay
Kap-kapatay huvay honton ko bheench letay hain
Is say pehlay k koi baat nikalnay paayay

Hont khamosh, par eshas so nahi saktay
Baat kartay bhe nahi, baat samajh letay hain
Jantay hain k bichharna hay muqaddar in ka
Aanay walay sabhi haalaat samajh letay hain

Hath ne haath ko ik pal k liyay thaam liya
Ake lamhay main zamana he guzar jata hay
Dharkanen taze huve jaa rahi hain ku aakhir
Door rastay pay ik do-raaha nazar ata hay

Gar bichhar jain gay hum tum tu jiyen gay kaisay?
Ajnabi do, kahin rastay main milay hain jaisay



Very Nice Poetry ... VB Ji ! ehsaas bahut khoob rahen ... dil se daad ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2010, 10:40:10 PM »
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WAh ji wah !!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2010, 01:33:11 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2010, 12:16:13 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      VB JI.....


AJNABI DO
CHAH EK

RAHI DO
MANZIL EK

JISM DO
JAAN EK

PAR KISMAT DEKH
NA HONE DE EK

AJNABI DO
RAHE GAYE AJNABI WO..
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