Ake aavara, deevana sa ...(by vb)

by vb on December 12, 2013, 04:45:49 PM
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Ake aavaaraa, deevaana sa is koochay say guzra hoga
vb vb kehtay hen sub, naam khuda jaanay kya ho ga

Baal pareshaaN, nazren neechi, bhoori rangat, baykal chehra
Kaan men mundri, galay men mankay, haath men us k kaasaa ho ga

BA, MA paas kiyay hen, lekin us ki haalat dekho
Is koochay ka bacha bacha, paagal paagal kehta ho ga

Is basti k logon ne kuchh pather bhe tu maaray hon gay
Lekin wo ik mast kavi hay, apni dhun men rehta ho ga

Saat samandar paar suna hay, ik larki par marta hay wo
Us larki kaa naam kabhi tu chaltay phirtay leta ho ga

Suntay thay k ishq ki hiddat pather ko pighla deti hay
Jaanay kaisi larki ho ge, jis ko is ne chaahaa ho ga

Hum ko gar wo mil jayay tu us larki say itna kehtay
Jitna is ne pyaar kiya hay, kon kisi say karta ho ga

Laakh bahaanay hotay hen jub chhor he jana hota hay gee
Ishq men aisa hota hay, kya us larki ne socha ho ga?

Us aavaara deewanay ko jis ne dekha rotay dekha
Rab na aisa waqt dikhayay, jaisa is ne dekha ho ga


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«Reply #4 on: December 12, 2013, 05:36:49 PM »
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Ake aavaaraa, deevaana sa is koochay say guzra hoga
vb vb kehtay hen sub, naam khuda jaanay kya ho ga

Baal pareshaaN, nazren neechi, bhoori rangat, baykal chehra
Kaan men mundri, galay men mankay, haath men us k kaasaa ho ga

BA, MA paas kiyay hen, lekin us ki haalat dekho
Is koochay ka bacha bacha, paagal paagal kehta ho ga

Is basti k logon ne kuchh pather bhe tu maaray hon gay
Lekin wo ik mast kavi hay, apni dhun men rehta ho ga

Saat samandar paar suna hay, ik larki par marta hay wo
Us larki kaa naam kabhi tu chaltay phirtay leta ho ga

Suntay thay k ishq ki hiddat pather ko pighla deti hay
Jaanay kaisi larki ho ge, jis ko is ne chaahaa ho ga

Hum ko gar wo mil jayay tu us larki say itna kehtay
Jitna is ne pyaar kiya hay, kon kisi say karta ho ga

Laakh bahaanay hotay hen jub chhor he jana hota hay gee
Ishq men aisa hota hay, kya us larki ne socha ho ga?

Us aavaara deewanay ko jis ne dekha rotay dekha
Rab na aisa waqt dikhayay, jaisa is ne dekha ho ga


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aah aah our bas aah ,.............waah.waah ki iss nazm main gunjayiesh nahin,hasil e nazm yeh lines meri kam ilmee our naqis raaye main ,.........
Suntay thay k ishq ki hiddat pather ko pighla deti hay
Jaanay kaisi larki ho ge, jis ko is ne chaahaa ho ga

jiske man mein hij.r basera kar jaye woh hi aisaa likhtaa ho gaa,..........
shaad aabad raheN
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«Reply #5 on: December 12, 2013, 07:49:47 PM »
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excellent.......super dooper..behad behad behad ljawab
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«Reply #6 on: December 12, 2013, 08:45:55 PM »
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वाह...वाह...बहुत ही खूब...ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद......

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«Reply #7 on: December 12, 2013, 10:19:05 PM »
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Hmmmmmmmmmm wht to say... just  love9 touching..
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«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2013, 10:27:39 PM »
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aap sub ne pasand kiya, paziraai ka buhat shukriya...
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