Akela kar gaya hai koi

by deepika_divya on April 04, 2009, 06:07:26 AM
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Sajda kar mujhe , ak dua de gaya hai koi
le kar mujhse vada, akela kar gaya koi

pucha sawal jab maine ,uske jaane par
tho mere sawalo ko andekha kar gaya  koi

raah mea chod akela woh anjana sa saya
meri ruh mea se jaan ko juda kar gaya koi

patar tho nahi hun main, mere pass bhi dil hai
kyun dil ko mere , jaan kar zakmi kar gaya koi


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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: April 04, 2009, 06:22:36 AM »
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Very nice indeed...bohot khoob Sophi
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2009, 06:31:42 AM »
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Thank you Talat Di.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2009, 07:04:47 AM »
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Arey wah kya baat hain......Good work
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: April 04, 2009, 07:08:08 AM »
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Thank you Sajid Ji.
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2009, 07:19:12 AM »
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Akela Kar Gaya Koi,
Tanha Bikhar Gaya Koi

Dhadkan Bhi Hain Sansain Bhi,
Lekin Mar Gaya Koi

Apne Hi Sawaalon Se,
Baarha Dar Gaya Koi

In Aankhon Main Basta tha
Ab Khwaab Utar Gaya Koi

Dard Ki Har Manzil Se,
Aaj Guzar Gaya Koi !!



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«Reply #6 on: April 04, 2009, 07:23:46 AM »
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Bahut achhe sophi...

EK dard ki chadar mein mujhe samet gaya hai koi,
chahat thi chaand ki, mujhe andhere de gaya koi,

pyaar ki panahon ki talab rahi hamesha hi mujhe,
ashqon ke samundar mein ajab si Pyaas de gaya koi...
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«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2009, 07:30:06 AM »
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Khud ban kar mazloom
Har ilzaam mere sar dhar gaya koi

Mere qatl par mili wah wahi
Kuch is ada se safaiee pesh kar gaya koi

Har baat pe rona har waqt ka matam
Use jab bhi dekha yu laga mar gaya hain koi

Tera kya bohat mil jayege tujhe chamakte tare
Main woh chand hu jise GHAYEL kar gaya koi
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #8 on: April 04, 2009, 07:33:28 AM »
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Akela Kar Gaya Koi,
Tanha Bikhar Gaya Koi

Dhadkan Bhi Hain Sansain Bhi,
Lekin Mar Gaya Koi

Apne Hi Sawaalon Se,
Baarha Dar Gaya Koi

In Aankhon Main Basta tha
Ab Khwaab Utar Gaya Koi

Dard Ki Har Manzil Se,
Aaj Guzar Gaya Koi !!





WAH WAH KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI DI.

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deepika_divya
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«Reply #9 on: April 04, 2009, 07:35:26 AM »
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Bahut achhe sophi...

EK dard ki chadar mein mujhe samet gaya hai koi,
chahat thi chaand ki, mujhe andhere de gaya koi,

pyaar ki panahon ki talab rahi hamesha hi mujhe,
ashqon ke samundar mein ajab si Pyaas de gaya koi...


WOW . VERY GOOD LINES ANJEL.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: April 04, 2009, 07:36:48 AM »
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Khud ban kar mazloom
Har ilzaam mere sar dhar gaya koi

Mere qatl par mili wah wahi
Kuch is ada se safaiee pesh kar gaya koi

Har baat pe rona har waqt ka matam
Use jab bhi dekha yu laga mar gaya hain koi

Tera kya bohat mil jayege tujhe chamakte tare
Main woh chand hu jise GHAYEL kar gaya koi

WAH WAH SAJID JI KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI. Usual Smile
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angel4u
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2009, 07:44:01 AM »
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Thanks Sophi...
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k.shael
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2009, 07:46:24 AM »
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Sajda kar mujhe , ak dua de gaya hai koi
le kar mujhse vada, akela kar gaya koi

pucha sawal jab maine ,uske jaane par
tho mere sawalo ko andekha kar gaya  koi

raah mea chod akela woh anjana sa saya
meri ruh mea se jaan ko juda kar gaya koi

patar tho nahi hun main, mere pass bhi dil hai
kyun dil ko mere , jaan kar zakmi kar gaya koi




 Applause  Applause
Bahut Khoob Sophi Dear,

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #13 on: April 04, 2009, 07:48:06 AM »
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Khud ban kar mazloom
Har ilzaam mere sar dhar gaya koi

Mere qatl par mili wah wahi
Kuch is ada se safaiee pesh kar gaya koi

Har baat pe rona har waqt ka matam
Use jab bhi dekha yu laga mar gaya hain koi

Tera kya bohat mil jayege tujhe chamakte tare
Main woh chand hu jise GHAYEL kar gaya koi

 Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
Sajid ji jawab nahi aapki shayri ka,
Ek line ko iss kadr dusri se jodte hai aap ki
dil tak utar jaati hai..

Bahut Umda har line..

Shally.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #14 on: April 04, 2009, 08:02:16 AM »
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Thank u shally!
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