*Andhar Kitne Kale Log*

by Roja on December 09, 2007, 08:35:17 AM
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Sabke paav ke chale log
Khote sikke wale log

Baat kare hai sadiyon ki
Pal main mitne wale log

Kadam kadam pe bhesh badal ke
Herdam badale pale log

Baher kaise roop salone
Andhar kitne Kale log

Kaise-kaise naag vishaule
Aasteen main paale log..
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«Reply #1 on: December 09, 2007, 08:38:35 AM »
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Waah... Bahut khoob likha hai Roja.. Usual Smile Its so true...

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«Reply #2 on: December 09, 2007, 08:42:55 AM »
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bahot khoob likha aap ne di...
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«Reply #3 on: December 09, 2007, 12:34:11 PM »
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Bahut ache roja.bahut khoob kaha
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«Reply #4 on: December 09, 2007, 01:36:58 PM »
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Roja

Bravo !

Very good ! Bilkul satya likha hai !

Keep it up !
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«Reply #5 on: December 09, 2007, 02:45:23 PM »
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REALITY BITE'S,BAHUT KHOOB ROJA
SACHAI SI BHARI KAVITA THI.BAHUT KHOOB
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«Reply #6 on: December 12, 2007, 10:39:05 AM »
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Bohot khoob Roja...I liked these lines the most :

Baat kare hai sadiyon ki
Pal main mitne wale log
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«Reply #7 on: December 17, 2007, 12:10:14 PM »
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wah wah Roja.. its a simple n sweet n true wordings by u..
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«Reply #8 on: April 06, 2010, 11:48:09 AM »
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Sabke paav ke chale log
Khote sikke wale log

Baat kare hai sadiyon ki
Pal main mitne wale log

Kadam kadam pe bhesh badal ke
Herdam badale pale log

Baher kaise roop salone
Andhar kitne Kale log

Kaise-kaise naag vishaule
Aasteen main paale log..

wonderful.... i loved  those lines so true!
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«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2011, 10:24:26 AM »
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nice
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