apna..A.B

by adil bechain on April 10, 2011, 09:05:12 AM
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                         silsila udaasi ka youn hi chalta raha,
                         qadam badhte gaye dard milta raha,

                         thi numm aankhein jo the dooor muddatoan,
                         qareeb aate gaye ashq nikalta raha,

                         pyaar wo apna jo tha tanhai mein barsoan,
                         wafa-e-fiza mein sadiyon khilta raha,

                         shauk-e-deedar mein hua haal kuch aisa,
                         ruki rahi nigaah, manzar jhoomta raha,

                         roshni-e-jahaan se jo hua ashna bechain!!
                         chiraag aashiyane ka haule-haule bujhta raha!!!!

                        
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«Reply #1 on: April 10, 2011, 10:14:14 AM »
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waah…
kuch bechaini sa feel ho gaya yar.
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2011, 11:54:22 AM »
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kuch bechaini sa feel ho gaya yar.

thank you killbill
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2011, 10:56:46 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2011, 11:05:22 AM »
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wah wah... adilji.... kamaal ki ghazal kahi hai... daad

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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2011, 08:26:53 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2011, 08:55:40 AM »
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adil ji bahut khoob.
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2011, 07:50:48 AM »
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wah wah... adilji.... kamaal ki ghazal kahi hai... daad

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thank u manjum ji
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adil ji bahut khoob.
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thank you suresh ji
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«Reply #9 on: May 23, 2011, 08:12:09 AM »
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 angel11 angel11 angel11

Wah adil ji Kya ghazal hai,

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«Reply #10 on: May 23, 2011, 08:22:10 AM »
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Bahut Khoooob adil Ji

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«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2011, 05:43:07 AM »
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Bahut Khoooob adil Ji

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thank you khawaish ji
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