arz hai jab bhi lihko kuchh achha sa likho----bansi

by BANSI DHAMEJA on August 06, 2012, 01:15:48 PM
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Shayron ne duniyan ko chalne ka rasta dikhaya hai
Waqt waqt pe gum rahon ko raah pe layaa hai
 
Shayar apne lafzon se duniya ko badal sakata hai
Wo to tabhi ho sakta hai jab wo dil ko choo leta hai

Arz hai Yoindia pe sabhi doston se
Koshish karo aur  kuchh achha sa likho

Mohabat pe likho ya ibadat pe likho
Gam pe likhp ya khushi pe likho
 
Zamane pe likho ya Khuda pe likho
Par arz hai job hi likho kuchh achha sa likho
-----------------bansi dhameja(madhur)
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2012, 01:41:20 PM »
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wah wah wah
kya baat hai bansi ji

khoob kaha aapne..
bas accha sa likho..Applause Applause

BAS ACCHA SA PADHO..tab bhi baat ban sakti hai.
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2012, 02:11:54 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2012, 05:39:36 PM »
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Shayron ne duniyan ko chalne ka rasta dikhaya hai
Waqt waqt pe gum rahon ko raah pe layaa hai
 
Shayar apne lafzon se duniya ko badal sakata hai
Wo to tabhi ho sakta hai jab wo dil ko choo leta hai

Arz hai Yoindia pe sabhi doston se
Koshish karo aur  kuchh achha sa likho

Mohabat pe likho ya ibadat pe likho
Gam pe likhp ya khushi pe likho
 
Zamane pe likho ya Khuda pe likho
Par arz hai job hi likho kuchh achha sa likho
-----------------bansi dhameja(madhur)



                 koshish jaari hai huzooooooor. Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2012, 07:35:14 PM »
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wah wah, prenadayak panktiya likhi hain, koshish karunga
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2012, 07:46:42 PM »
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Bahut khoob , dhameja ji . Bilkul sahi .
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2012, 12:47:33 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2012, 06:52:03 AM »
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waahhh waahh bansi g bilkul sahi kaha aapne
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2012, 12:27:49 PM »
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mukesh ji thanks.
yoindia pe achha parhte parhte achha sa kuchh likh leta hoon
aur jab aap jaise dosyon ko achha lagta hai to khush hota hoon
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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2012, 02:38:54 AM »
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mohammd touhid ji shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2012, 06:05:25 AM »
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