<>*Ashkon se diye jala jati hun*<>

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<>*Ashkon se diye jala jati hun*<>

Har raat tere sher mere kaanon me gunje jate hain
Na jane kya kehte hain kyunkar wo mujhe bulate hain

Main khamosh ehsaason k sath unhe padhti jati hun
Kuch gungunati hui na jane fir kyun ruk jati hun

Ungliyan keyboard pe chalti hain fir thaher jati hain
Jazbaaton ki aandhi bhi uthti hai fir thum jati hai

Kuch batein, kuch dard yunhi saamne aa jate hain
Kuch galat fehmiyon ki deewar samne khadi ho jati hain

Na chahte hue bhi ungliyan meri rukti jati hain
Bante bante gazal sirf ek sher banker reh jati hai

Main khamosh nigaahon si un sheron ko padhti rehti hun
Jinhe tu kehta hai mazaar wahan ashkon se diye jala jati hun...!!!

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«Reply #1 on: November 09, 2010, 01:56:24 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 09, 2010, 06:42:46 AM »
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Anamika ji.....mast likha hai ji.....ye alp samay ki judaayee ka geet.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
socha tha nahi likhunga par ungaliyein chal he padi.....


Yu yaad me meri tu nagme banaaye jaati hai......
Mere sheron ki mazaar pe ashqon k diye jalaaye jaati hai....

Ye jaan mein tou ban teri jaan tujh me he jiye ja raha hu
Kyu tu mujhe apne se durr alag maane jaa rahi hai......

Meri har saans teri he saans ke saath judi huyee hai
Tere bina ek pal bhi meri rooh kab sakun se reh payee hai...

Laut aaunga jaldee mein he teri julfon ki chhaav mai
Mere sanam naa ho udaas,deewali mana k aaunga mai....

Mitt jaayengi sab galat fehmiyen,na seh tu ab unka dard
Tujhe kasam meri,ashqon se na nawaaz mere sheron ko tu....

Inhe mai tou basti hai jaan meri,jaanti he tu o-meri-jaan
Jazbaaton ki aandhiyon mai naa beh,bas ab hai thoda intezaar......




<>*Ashkon se diye jala jati hun*<>

Har raat tere sher mere kaanon me gunje jate hain
Na jane kya kehte hain kyunkar wo mujhe bulate hain

Main khamosh ehsaason k sath unhe padhti jati hun
Kuch gungunati hui na jane fir kyun ruk jati hun

Ungliyan keyboard pe chalti hain fir thaher jati hain
Jazbaaton ki aandhi bhi uthti hai fir thum jati hai

Kuch batein, kuch dard yunhi saamne aa jate hain
Kuch galat fehmiyon ki deewar samne khadi ho jati hain

Na chahte hue bhi ungliyan meri rukti jati hain
Bante bante gazal sirf ek sher banker reh jati hai

Main khamosh nigaahon si un sheron ko padhti rehti hun
Jinhe tu kehta hai mazaar wahan ashkon se diye jala jati hun...!!!

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«Reply #3 on: November 09, 2010, 01:42:11 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: November 09, 2010, 01:55:11 PM »
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Khoob kasak ji......
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«Reply #5 on: November 09, 2010, 02:09:12 PM »
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hmm good one anu ji...dher sari daad~
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«Reply #6 on: November 09, 2010, 10:03:34 PM »
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bahaut acchha kasak ji. sadagi aur sacchhai se khoobsurat khayal zahir kiye.
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«Reply #7 on: November 10, 2010, 02:09:04 AM »
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thats so nice!!! bohat acha hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: November 10, 2010, 10:42:48 AM »
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meri na sahi mere shero ki to pahunch hai tujh tak,
yahi kaafi hai ki meri awaz to pahunchi tujh tak,

Applause Applause aaj ye rachna nigah se gujri.......bahoot achcha likha hai daad kabool karen
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«Reply #9 on: November 11, 2010, 12:26:04 PM »
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Bahot khoob Kasak ji. Bahot shandar aur behtreen creation hai ye aapki. Mubarakbaad pesh karta hun.
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«Reply #10 on: November 23, 2010, 10:37:38 AM »
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Khoob kasak ji......
hmm good one anu ji...dher sari daad~
thats so nice!!! bohat acha hai Usual Smile
bahaut acchha kasak ji. sadagi aur sacchhai se khoobsurat khayal zahir kiye.
Bahot khoob Kasak ji. Bahot shandar aur behtreen creation hai ye aapki. Mubarakbaad pesh karta hun.

thnx alot geet ji..abhi ji...simi ji...zarra ji..riyaz ji...k aapne ye padha aur saraha....hausla afzaii ka shukriya ji....
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«Reply #11 on: November 23, 2010, 10:39:44 AM »
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meri na sahi mere shero ki to pahunch hai tujh tak,
yahi kaafi hai ki meri awaz to pahunchi tujh tak,

Applause Applause aaj ye rachna nigah se gujri.......bahoot achcha likha hai daad kabool karen

kuch gunjte rehte hai mere kaanon me kuch dil me utar jate hain
ye tere sher hi to hain ee dost jo mujhe jeene ki wajah dete hain.....


thnx bekaraar ji k aapne itna khubsurat sher kaha yahan...mera likha pasand karne k liye bht bht shukriya ji
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«Reply #12 on: November 23, 2010, 10:40:24 AM »
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Anamika ji.....mast likha hai ji.....ye alp samay ki judaayee ka geet.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
socha tha nahi likhunga par ungaliyein chal he padi.....


Yu yaad me meri tu nagme banaaye jaati hai......
Mere sheron ki mazaar pe ashqon k diye jalaaye jaati hai....

Ye jaan mein tou ban teri jaan tujh me he jiye ja raha hu
Kyu tu mujhe apne se durr alag maane jaa rahi hai......

Meri har saans teri he saans ke saath judi huyee hai
Tere bina ek pal bhi meri rooh kab sakun se reh payee hai...

Laut aaunga jaldee mein he teri julfon ki chhaav mai
Mere sanam naa ho udaas,deewali mana k aaunga mai....

Mitt jaayengi sab galat fehmiyen,na seh tu ab unka dard
Tujhe kasam meri,ashqon se na nawaaz mere sheron ko tu....

Inhe mai tou basti hai jaan meri,jaanti he tu o-meri-jaan
Jazbaaton ki aandhiyon mai naa beh,bas ab hai thoda intezaar......





bht khubbb anaam ji...pyaari si aapki rachna bht acchi lagi hume
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«Reply #13 on: November 23, 2010, 10:41:11 PM »
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kuch gunjte rehte hai mere kaanon me kuch dil me utar jate hain
ye tere sher hi to hain ee dost jo mujhe jeene ki wajah dete hain.....



bahoot khoob KDK ji

ab mere sheron pe koi daad bhi nahi deta,
teri saafgoi yun mahfil ko nagawar gujari,


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«Reply #14 on: November 23, 2010, 11:10:31 PM »
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bahoot khoob KDK ji

ab mere sheron pe koi daad bhi nahi deta,
teri saafgoi yun mahfil ko nagawar gujari,



waahhhh bekaraar ji

kehte kehte ruk gai main bhari mehfil me
iss tarah logon ki nazar teri taraf uthi.....
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