::- ashq bhare ::-

by sarvan on April 02, 2012, 10:48:39 PM

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ashq bhare muskaano par
maiyat jahan ki roti hai
lamba ooncha qadd uska par
ghutan saanso ki hoti hai :/


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Re: ::- ashq bhare ::-

«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2012, 11:06:14 PM »

Quote from: sarvan on April 02, 2012, 10:48:39 PM

ashq bhare muskaano par
maiyat jahan ki roti hai
lamba ooncha qadd uska par
ghutan saanso ki hoti hai :/

bhai dekho bura mat manna aapne jo ye sayri likhi h ye samjh nhi par rahi h.
Wese last line achchi h.
Thori kosis or kare agli bar esse achcha likh payege.


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Re: ::- ashq bhare ::-

«Reply #3 on: May 14, 2012, 12:29:09 PM »

Quote from: masoom shahjada on April 02, 2012, 11:06:14 PM

bhai dekho bura mat manna aapne jo ye sayri likhi h ye samjh nhi par rahi h.
Wese last line achchi h.
Thori kosis or kare agli bar esse achcha likh payege.

janaab itna muskil bhi nahi hai--
wese sikhaiega aap to seekh bhi jaenge kabhi na kabhi hum bhi