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aankhon  aankhon  mein   woh   izhaar   kar  jaate hain
kuch  kahe  binaa    woh   saamne  se  guzar jaate hain

unki   deewaangi   nahi  to  bhalaa  yeh  aur  kyaa  hai
sirf  hamaaraa   naam  sun ke   woh   sanwar jaate hain

shaayad  kami  hum mein  hai  ab  tak  keh  nahi paaye
manaa naa karden woh yeh sochke hum dar jaate hain

kitni  baar  koshish  ki  keh  den  dil  ki  baat hum unse
magar  zubaan  par  laate  laate hum thahar jaate hain

pehle aanaa  hotaa thaa hamaari gali mein unkaa aksar
ab  unke  deedaar  ke  liye hum un ke shahar jaate hain

naa  woh  kehte  hain  naa  hi  hum se kahaa jaataa hai
koshish  mein  guzar  kai  raat aur   dopahar  jaate hain

din   guzaar   dete  hain  unki  khidki  ke   saamne  hum
aur   raatein   bas    unki   yaad  mein   guzar jaate hain


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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2013, 07:12:01 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hriday ji...
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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2013, 07:18:11 PM »
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WAAH WAAH....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2013, 07:47:40 PM »
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uffffffffffffffff .......... kp .... bilkul mere jaisa likha hai tumne ... ekdum jhakaasssss super duper claass.......  NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa.... lo tumko padhkar likh liye hum bhi....

dekh dekh tujhe sanwar jati hun
teri tasveer dekh sharma jati hun

nai nai si lagun tujhe harpal main
roz hi naye roopon me dhal jati hun

dar lagta hai apni hi naadaani se
tere saamne isiliye chup laga jati hun

meri khamoshi se mere dil ke raaz padh le
main har saans me tera naam liye jati hun

kasak keh rahi khamoshi se suno o dil ji
teri sangat me ab likhti chali jati hun....
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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2013, 07:48:47 PM »
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 :)wow so nice
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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2013, 08:16:39 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2013, 08:18:13 PM »
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dekh dekh tujhe sanwar jati hun
teri tasveer dekh sharma jati hun

nai nai si lagun tujhe harpal main
roz hi naye roopon me dhal jati hun

dar lagta hai apni hi naadaani se
tere saamne isiliye chup laga jati hun

meri khamoshi se mere dil ke raaz padh le
main har saans me tera naam liye jati hun

kasak keh rahi khamoshi se suno o dil ji
teri sangat me ab likhti chali jati hun....
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2013, 08:38:39 PM »
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aankhon  aankhon  mein   woh   izhaar   kar  jaate hain
kuch  kahe  binaa    woh   saamne  se  guzar jaate hain

unki   deewaangi   nahi  to  bhalaa  yeh  aur  kyaa  hai
sirf  hamaaraa   naam  sun ke   woh   sanwar jaate hain

shaayad  kami  hum mein  hai  ab  tak  keh  nahi paaye
manaa naa karden woh yeh sochke hum dar jaate hain

kitni  baar  koshish  ki  keh  den  dil  ki  baat hum unse
magar  zubaan  par  laate  laate hum thahar jaate hain

pehle aanaa  hotaa thaa hamaari gali mein unkaa aksar
ab  unke  deedaar  ke  liye hum un ke shahar jaate hain

naa  woh  kehte  hain  naa  hi  hum se kahaa jaataa hai
koshish  mein  guzar  kai  raat aur   dopahar  jaate hain

din   guzaar   dete  hain  unki  khidki  ke   saamne  hum
aur   raatein   bas    unki   yaad  mein   guzar jaate hain


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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2013, 09:47:07 PM »
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uffffffffffffffff .......... kp .... bilkul mere jaisa likha hai tumne ... ekdum jhakaasssss super duper claass.......  NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa.... lo tumko padhkar likh liye hum bhi....

dekh dekh tujhe sanwar jati hun
teri tasveer dekh sharma jati hun

nai nai si lagun tujhe harpal main
roz hi naye roopon me dhal jati hun

dar lagta hai apni hi naadaani se
tere saamne isiliye chup laga jati hun

meri khamoshi se mere dil ke raaz padh le
main har saans me tera naam liye jati hun

kasak keh rahi khamoshi se suno o dil ji
teri sangat me ab likhti chali jati hun....
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Thank you ji thank you soooo much... upar se aapne mere is koshish ko apne khoobsoorat reply se aur zyaadaa khoobsoorat banaa diyaa hai... waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne aapke is jawaab kaa... mazaa aa gayaa... ek dum zabardasssttt likhaa hai aapne Kasak ji...!!!

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Ye lijiye meraa jawaab bhi tayyaar hai... ummeed kartaa hoon aapko achchi lagegi...!!!

jhooti mooti baatein mujhse banaayaa naa karo
yun meri tasveer ko dekh sharmaayaa naa karo

jaantaa hoon main tumhe mujh se mohabbat hai
dil ki baaton ko mujh se chhipaayaa naa karo

jaante ho tum bhi meraa kyaa haal hai tum bin
yun jaan ke har baat mujhe tadpaayaa naa karo

baitho der tak mere saamne ki dekh loon tumhe
yun mujhse roz naye bahaane banaayaa naa karo

kahin neeyat mein khot naa aajaaye mere kabhi
yun mohabbat ke liye mujhe tarsaayaa naa karo

jaante ho main deewaanaa hoon tumhaare liye
haalat pe mere is tarhaa muskuraayaa naa karo


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Waah waah bahut khoobsurat likha hai hriday bhai bole to ekdum jhakkas..Dhero daad iss umda kalaam pe..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2013, 09:05:43 AM »
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Bahut khoob Hriday jee
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aur Kasak jee ne aakar is post me chaar chaand laga diye.
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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2013, 02:39:28 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hriday jee
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shukriya MKV ji ... meri tooti footi lines ko hamesha sarahne ke liye bht bht thnxxxx
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