AYE DIL NA SISAK, ROOK LE AANSO NA BEHNE DE

by pandit on April 09, 2009, 12:58:17 AM
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«Reply #30 on: May 12, 2009, 05:32:32 AM »
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sanju bahut khoob sabhi kalam apke bahut ache hai keep up the wonderful work...

kuch likh rahey hia pata nahi apko kesa lagega Usual Smile apke kalam ke ahge to kuch bhi nahi hai phir bhi ek koshish hai Usual Smile


Dard main woh bhi hain,
Dard mein hum bhi.
Woh aasoo Dekha rahen hain,
hum aaso shuka rahen hain.
Farq sirf itna hain ki,
woh zamane ko dikha rahen hain,
aur hum khuda se bhi chupa rahein hain
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pandit
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«Reply #31 on: May 12, 2009, 05:37:51 AM »
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sanju bahut khoob sabhi kalam apke bahut ache hai keep up the wonderful work...

kuch likh rahey hia pata nahi apko kesa lagega Usual Smile apke kalam ke ahge to kuch bhi nahi hai phir bhi ek koshish hai Usual Smile


Dard main woh bhi hain,
Dard mein hum bhi.
Woh aasoo Dekha rahen hain,
hum aaso shuka rahen hain.
Farq sirf itna hain ki,
woh zamane ko dikha rahen hain,
aur hum khuda se bhi chupa rahein hain



AREY WAAH SONU JEE....

AAPNE BHI BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI....
THANKS TOO
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Sonu
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«Reply #32 on: May 12, 2009, 05:44:46 AM »
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ufff shukriya pandit ji... har ke mujhey ji per ahna hi pada hadh hai yaar etni bar hai kha hai ke ji mat kahow phir ji khey rahey hu to thik hai hum bhi apko pandit ji kahnge... thik  hai  NaNaNa Is it SO! sudharne vale to app hai nahi to hum hi bigadh jate hia ab  NaNaNa...

shukriay pandit ji bahut bahut shukriyaa... ab jara sa reply do to hum to apke kalam ka luft jara sa utha le  NaNaNa hello2



AREY WAAH SONU JEE....

AAPNE BHI BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI....
THANKS TOO
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«Reply #33 on: May 12, 2009, 05:56:47 AM »
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ufff shukriya pandit ji... har ke mujhey ji per ahna hi pada hadh hai yaar etni bar hai kha hai ke ji mat kahow phir ji khey rahey hu to thik hai hum bhi apko pandit ji kahnge... thik  hai  NaNaNa Is it SO! sudharne vale to app hai nahi to hum hi bigadh jate hia ab  NaNaNa...

shukriay pandit ji bahut bahut shukriyaa... ab jara sa reply do to hum to apke kalam ka luft jara sa utha le  NaNaNa hello2



OK.....

DIL KI HAR SISAK, AANSOO PE TERA NAAM HAI,
TERI BEWAFAI KA NAAM, HUMARI WAFA BADNAAM HAI.




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Sonu
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«Reply #34 on: May 12, 2009, 06:03:59 AM »
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mm acha likha hai nice reply mmm bahut bahut mehrbani sir ji jo apne humari eltjaa kabool kerli or reply bhi dea..

khuda kare ki pyar me kisi ka dil na toote
jaise rutha mera sanam kisi aur ka na ruthe
rota hai dil aur toot jate hain sapne
ankhon ke aansoo bhi nahin hote hain apne


OK.....

DIL KI HAR SISAK, AANSOO PE TERA NAAM HAI,
TERI BEWAFAI KA NAAM, HUMARI WAFA BADNAAM HAI.





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«Reply #35 on: May 12, 2009, 06:15:57 AM »
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mm acha likha hai nice reply mmm bahut bahut mehrbani sir ji jo apne humari eltjaa kabool kerli or reply bhi dea..

khuda kare ki pyar me kisi ka dil na toote
jaise rutha mera sanam kisi aur ka na ruthe
rota hai dil aur toot jate hain sapne
ankhon ke aansoo bhi nahin hote hain apne



accha likha hai aapne sonu..


HAR MULAKAAT KA ANZAAM JUDAI Q HAI,
GAR YE MOHABBAT HAI TO YE BAYAI Q HAI.

SHAYAD MOHABBAT ME SAWALO K JAWAAB NAHI HOTE,
GAR INN-K JAWAAB NAHI TO YE SAWAAL BANAYE Q HAI.
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Sonu
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«Reply #36 on: May 12, 2009, 06:22:22 AM »
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shukriya pandit ji...

apne bhi bahut acha likha hia.. yeo hi likhte rahow..

jaha dard hai vha rusvai hai
pyar ka dusra nam hi judai hai
jub zindgi sawal ben jaye
to vohi mahubat ki dasta beyan kerta hai
jo hu na sake izhar to usi ko badnam kerta hia
pyar ka duja nam hi sawal hai
sawal ka nam hi mahubat hai
mahubat ka nam judai hia
or juadi ka nam sirf maut hai


accha likha hai aapne sonu..


HAR MULAKAAT KA ANZAAM JUDAI Q HAI,
GAR YE MOHABBAT HAI TO YE BAYAI Q HAI.

SHAYAD MOHABBAT ME SAWALO K JAWAAB NAHI HOTE,
GAR INN-K JAWAAB NAHI TO YE SAWAAL BANAYE Q HAI.

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«Reply #37 on: May 12, 2009, 06:32:58 AM »
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shukriya pandit ji...

apne bhi bahut acha likha hia.. yeo hi likhte rahow..

jaha dard hai vha rusvai hai
pyar ka dusra nam hi judai hai
jub zindgi sawal ben jaye
to vohi mahubat ki dasta beyan kerta hai
jo hu na sake izhar to usi ko badnam kerta hia
pyar ka duja nam hi sawal hai
sawal ka nam hi mahubat hai
mahubat ka nam judai hia
or juadi ka nam sirf maut hai


AGAIN AACHA LIKHA HAI SONU..
M FEELING SLEEPY...
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«Reply #38 on: May 12, 2009, 06:52:05 AM »
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thanks sanju ok to so jaow kal bat hu jaygi... have ha sweet dream sleep tight don't get p. anuty bite

AGAIN AACHA LIKHA HAI SONU..
M FEELING SLEEPY...
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pandit
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«Reply #39 on: May 13, 2009, 11:44:42 PM »
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thanks sanju ok to so jaow kal bat hu jaygi... have ha sweet dream sleep tight don't get p. anuty bite


THANKS SONU,
BUT I GOT THE BITE..
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Sonu
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«Reply #40 on: May 14, 2009, 03:47:44 AM »
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your most welcome sanju ... hahaha acha good for u hahahaha

THANKS SONU,
BUT I GOT THE BITE..
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pandit
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«Reply #41 on: May 14, 2009, 07:02:07 AM »
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your most welcome sanju ... hahaha acha good for u hahahaha


DONT LAUGH HERE...
GO N GRAB SUM MEDICINES AND SLEEP SOON..... hello2 Giggle laughing4 icon_salut happy3
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #42 on: May 14, 2009, 07:16:28 AM »
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pandit ji and sonu ji,bahut maza aaya aap dono ke beautiful shayris.
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pandit
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«Reply #43 on: May 14, 2009, 07:18:01 AM »
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pandit ji and sonu ji,bahut maza aaya aap dono ke beautiful shayris.

THANKS MADHU JEE...
HUME KHUSHI HAI KI HUMARI POEMS AAP K KUCH KAAM AA SAKII..
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Sonu
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«Reply #44 on: May 15, 2009, 04:28:58 AM »
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 NaNaNa keo hansne per pabandi hai kea  NaNaNa... ok baba khali hai davaa jub nind ahye to su jaungi ok boss  icon_salut NaNaNa

DONT LAUGH HERE...
GO N GRAB SUM MEDICINES AND SLEEP SOON..... hello2 Giggle laughing4 icon_salut happy3
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