Aye shaam k sitaaray (NM)

by vb on November 05, 2010, 10:39:07 PM
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«Reply #1 on: November 05, 2010, 11:16:08 PM »
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bahut payara kalaam hai vb aapka ...daad
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«Reply #2 on: November 05, 2010, 11:20:30 PM »
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poem present karne ka ye style bht achcha laga VB ji.....and poem to aapki hamesha hi mast mast hoti hai ..usi tarah ye bhi mastam hai ji.....
mast padha hai tab se gunguna rahi hun ise.......bht khubbbb vb ji ...
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«Reply #3 on: November 05, 2010, 11:50:08 PM »
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Nice presentation......VB.......expressive expression...... Applause Applause Applause

Mein hu raat ka mussafir, chand ka saath mila mujhe re
Aasma mai chamakte sitaron ne swagat kiya mera re

Tu kya jaane kaun hoon mein,abhi anjaan hai mujhse tu
Ye taare jaante hain ye nazaare jaante hain mujhe re

Rah mai bhatakte tujh jaise sharaabi kya jaane mujhe
Raaste ka zarraa-zarraa Jaanta-pehchaanta hai mujhe
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«Reply #4 on: November 06, 2010, 12:49:31 AM »
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acchhaa likha hai vb aapne. nazuk khayalon ko sundar flow mein daalaa hai.
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«Reply #5 on: November 06, 2010, 12:57:19 PM »
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Umdaa Creation Creation VB Jee.....

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne ... Dil se daad kabool kijiye..
Likhate rahiye.....
Khush O Aabaad rahiye.....

Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2010, 07:23:43 PM »
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   Bahut khoob Vb ji bahut achha likha hai aapne,maza aaya padh kar.
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