BaatoN baatoN me ...............Mamta Bajpai

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BaatoN baatoN me zikra aayaa thaa
yuN teree yaad ne rulaayaa thaa

kuchh kamee see thee tere jalwoN me
yaa nigaahoN ne dhokaa khaayaa thaa

shaq thaa tujhko meri wafaaoN pe
yaa mujhe yuN hee aazamaayaa thaa

kuchh nahee aur jal ke khaaq hue
peechhaa saaye se yuN chhuRaayaa thaa

baarhaa zakhm mere khulte rahe
teree hasrat ne sar uthaayaa thaa

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2012, 02:09:34 PM »
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Mamata Ji,

Bahut dinon ke baad yo par aapki ghazal
padhee achchha laga.

Khoobsoorat matla aur ashaar waah waah...

baatoN baatoN meN zikra aayaa tha
fir teree yaad ne rulaaya tha.....kya kahne

Dili mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayen.

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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2012, 03:37:27 AM »
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Wah wah Mamta ji bahot khubsurat ghazal apne kahi hai. Har sher mukammal, munfarid aur muassar hai. Daad pesh karta hun.
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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2012, 04:02:05 AM »
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Bahut umdaa ghazal se bazm ko nwaazaa hai badhai ho
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2012, 08:42:45 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob mamtaji..

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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2012, 08:46:27 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on February 04, 2012, 01:46:54 PM
BaatoN baatoN me zikra aayaa thaa
yuN teree yaad ne rulaayaa thaa

kuchh kamee see thee tere jalwoN me
yaa nigaahoN ne dhokaa khaayaa thaa

shaq thaa tujhko meri wafaaoN pe
yaa mujhe yuN hee aazamaayaa thaa

kuchh nahee aur jal ke khaaq hue
peechhaa saaye se yuN chhuRaayaa thaa

baarhaa zakhm mere khulte rahe
teree hasrat ne sar uthaayaa thaa

Mamta Bajpai


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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2012, 08:48:29 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob mamta ji.... Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2012, 11:18:03 AM »
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Mamtaa jee aadaab!

waah jee waah kia kahne behad khoob aur umda gazal
kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

matla toh masha Allaah behad khoob aur umdaa raha...
waise puri kalaam hi kabil e daad hai... Usual Smile

humari dili daad o mubarakbad kabul kijiye...Usual Smile

likhte rahiye, aate rahiye...
khush o aabaad rahiye...
khuda hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2012, 01:47:24 PM »
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Mamtaji. Bahut khubsurat ghazal inayat ki hai.Dheron daad.
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«Reply #9 on: February 10, 2012, 04:44:58 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on February 04, 2012, 01:46:54 PM
BaatoN baatoN me zikra aayaa thaa
yuN teree yaad ne rulaayaa thaa

kuchh kamee see thee tere jalwoN me
yaa nigaahoN ne dhokaa khaayaa thaa

shaq thaa tujhko meri wafaaoN pe
yaa mujhe yuN hee aazamaayaa thaa

kuchh nahee aur jal ke khaaq hue
peechhaa saaye se yuN chhuRaayaa thaa

baarhaa zakhm mere khulte rahe
teree hasrat ne sar uthaayaa thaa

Mamta Bajpai


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